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nth-x
2009-11-29 . chapter 4
So, I was re-reading Unknown hero, and was delighted to see that you'd started on a sequel. I'm eager to see where this goes, and a little dismayed to see you haven't updated it in a while.

I see that you're still writing, so hopefully the muse will bring you back to Rise of the King eventually.

Anyway, I enjoy reading your stories very much. Thanks for writing!
fantasychild95
2009-11-18 . chapter 4
update soon kk
irezel
2009-11-12 . chapter 4
really interesting series you have going here, though i'm not really interested in darkish!harry stories, this one i really am enjoying! :)
Luc
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
I read the unsung hero story on a one go. It started interesting, writing was good all the way but I hated the angst and that Harry, even at the end, didn't get what he deserved.
There really should've been a better confrontation of how Daniel was not the boy who lived. Now it was only rumours and it took fifty chapters for the truth to come out and then it felt as if it counted nothing.
I would've loved the story if the ending was better. This sort of ongoing angst put me off of it. And now that I've found the sequel, I just don't think it's even worth reading anymore. I really don't think this will end any better or Harry get justice. *shrugs* don't like don't read I guess.
In any case, I just wanted to drop a review, seeing I actually read the whole story and because there probably have been others that just quit enjoying it for the same reasons as I did and perhaps that would effect this next story and make it better. As I said, the writing and characterisation is good, plot just sucked. It was odd, because at the beginning the plot was going on well. Angst and drama just took over. And angst galore just isn't for me. Would've been nice to know that in the first chapter that it would turn like that. Maybe a warning?
garsdal
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
reentry! by the power of luna!
Delrusant
2009-10-15 . chapter 4
Not yet as enticing as Unsung Hero, but time will tell
LordNemesis
2009-10-14 . chapter 4
Ok I dont know if you are going to finsh this story or not but I hope you finsh it I love this story and I think Harry should be with Hermione and Luna and thats that.
DarkKnight99
2009-10-03 . chapter 4
Great Story, I hope Harry ends up with Hermione again because I think it would be a bit weird if Harry did'nt end up with her because they did get married at the end of your first one.

I was looking at the reviews and saw an idea someone wrote about Hermione memories being in the horcruxes to and Harry and Hermione get together again when they get there memories back and I hope you will consider it.

KEEP UP THE GOOS WORK AND UPDATE SOON!!
flare
2009-10-01 . chapter 4
good one man , but will this story be h/hr cant wait to see who u will pair with harry this time
bub23453
2009-09-29 . chapter 4
where's chapter 4? please PLEASE update soon!
Beth5572
2009-09-29 . chapter 4
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.



Thank you,



Terri
misinformed individual
2009-09-22 . chapter 4
its a good story i hope it turns out as well as the first one! but i think harry seems a bit arrogant to me...well maybe not arrogant but definatley kind of im-the-king-u-have-to-do-what-i-say which idk he just doesnt seem nice and its weird for him to have killed his brother. if you could explain this maybe in the next chapter or something itd make me happy
Anne399
2009-09-13 . chapter 4
Interesting theory about the Horcruxes gaining memories of the previous ones. Can't wait to see what Voldermort does next and if Harry puts in place any counter attack.
oldsoul1964
2009-09-09 . chapter 4
This is a very good story, will you be updating soon?
redninja2009
2009-09-09 . chapter 4
FANTASTIC story, I loved your first one Unsung Heroes and I loved the Harry/Hermione relationship in it, I would really like to see Harry and Hermione get together again in Rise of the King it would be weird for them not to get together as Harry and Hermione got Married in Unsung Heroes.

I only read storys that have Harry in a relationship with Ginny or Hermione and only see Harry and Luna as just good friends and I really don't want to stop reading this story because what you have written so far is so GOOD and I just don't want to stop and if Harry ends up with Luna I will stop reading this story and I just don't want to so I hope Harry and Hermione end up together again, I hope you consider the Idea in the review I saw in the review section of this story.

Keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!
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