Oh. This had promise. :( i liked it-if that makes you feel any better. I understand though.

I loved it! I love Jalice or Alisper. Def going on my favs. Can't wait for the epilouge

I'm sorry that you got some poor reviews, but your writing is really good. Don't let what other people say discourage you. Do what you need to do in your life and come back to it, if it means something to you. The reviews are nice, but writing is really about what it does for you. Good luck with everything on your plate. I hope you continue to write, even if it isn't with this story. :)

Well then does people dont know what they are saying cause its a great story :D please let me know when the rest is ready :)!

is that it? if it is - sorry, but that ending just sucks, it seems like you couldn't be asked to finish the story properly.

if it isn't - i hope you'll update soon, i'd really like to know what jasper made all this fuss about...

eh, allright? so this is the end, right? they all die? that's rather suprising, and doesn't really explain a thing but allright

UPDATE SOON SOON SOON!

"boss"! LOL cracked me up. fab story.

o loving this story wowzers cool letters...

Hi This is Charlotte PLEASE Would Yuu Update iv read all this story 3 times AND im Obsessed Its SO Gudd Please updat eif yuur going to LY Charlotte xo

P.S

PLEASE Write Back xxooxx

oh god _ alice to the rescue! _ love the flashback btw

poor alice! poor edward for hearing the counting D

this was awesome!

Ahh! I just read your story! It is so incredible! I love it!

But I feel so bad for Alice! I hope she saves Jasper!

Why did he go to volterra?

Anyways, this is absolutely amazing!

I can't wait to read more!

:)

cliffhanger! i love those. im really intrigued by your story, post more soon before i lose my mind!