Very good story so far, however I have found a spelling mistake. According to Rowling's book 1 - the name Quirrel is spelt as Quirrell (2 L's).



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I can't even attempt to figure out who the unexpected guests may be. probably cause my brain is a little tired.
Oh, so that's how Lindilwen got into the picture. And that was too bad about Tin Turquoise.

And, I was thinking about why this story isn't quite so popular. Maybe, to fix this you need to change the summary a little? Personally, I don't think there's anything wrong with it, but for one, the summary is the first impression, and some people may be deterred because they don't know these characters. Maybe you could try adding that it's an Elven world? Anyway, just a suggestion.

Thanks for the update!

Good. I'm glad Verimir did good in the girls' eyes. Thoughtful presents.

And, you're getting back to the main storyline? Well, i guess it's time.

I like his life. I keep wondering though if his future will will make an appearance? On that same train of thought, I'm suspicious of Gailia since I sadly don't remember his wife's name... although...

Sorry it took so long for me to review. Thanks for the update!

Last minute? Nope, didn't show.

If its a place for criminals/slaves, how comes there was that family there, living free? Are they a part of it or maybe just live in a village nearby?

I wonder if the girls of the Steel Jasper Gang (which I understand now) will appreciate his gesture of selecting dresses and things for them.

I can't help but wonder how and when he'll meet his wife.

Thanks for the update!

I'm sorry I didn't review for a while! It's just, I'm kind of behind on my story-reading because I don't use the computer very often anymore.

So, I don't really understand something. In the paragraph about the Drow's introductions, it said the "first three named themselves as the Titanium: Titanium Sapphire (the leader), Titanium Onyx (the smaller one that Verimir had kicked) and Titanium Quartz.", were the first three the people Verimir met first? Because, if that's the case, wasn't the stunted one called Steel Jasper earlier?

It seems strange to think of him as a thief before being the army(?) person he became.

And I like the explanation for why they're using English.

Thank for the update!

Well, Maltandir is an army figurehead, right? As for his past, I can only think of the typical few things: how he got to his position; how he met his Nienna; or some one of his adventures. Nimohtars are rangers (I read that from Calasier Avamela) so, you could base something off that. Sorry that these are so vague, but they're all I can think of right now.

Hope it helps! Thanks for the update!

Oh, so that was how he got the hand, I was wondering about that. Sadly, it doesn't seem as though his father ever found out he was still alive, or where he was. His fascination with everything on the island was adorable. I only found it strange that he never met any people, before Calenedil, or found any towns.

Thanks for the update!

Yay! I was kinda hoping Noalith would meet Harry in this chapter, but I can see why that wasn't possible.
So that's how Noalith got his name, huh? And based on the hatred he seems to be harboring for his father, does that mean Noalith never sought the man out?

Thanks, as per usual, for the update!

No, I did not expect that. Nestriv and Renewl are so cruel, and manipulative. Now that i think about the life he must have had down there, and their hand-cutting tradition, I feel sorry for Noalith. He couldn't have been that bad. And, Did the army generals kill his father by the time of Calasier Avamela?

Thanks for the update! And don't feel too depressed, the reviews will start pouring in soon.

Wow. Yeah, I see how Calasier Avamelda fits him now.
And, I found it strange that Hari saw no reason to answer Tom's questions, but did anyway.

Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to finding out more about Noalith's past!

Ooh, it's so interesting: Hari's Hogwarts days. The deception that he does so flawlessly. And he's already enamored with Draco. I wonder what will be his take on all of the fights they have in their school years.