This is good. :0 It would be nice if Rin recognized Kuro's feelings for her. T_T Poor Kuro...

Anyways good job! :D

cute

Very poetic and sincere great job.

Um, there already is a Kodomo no Jikan section... Go look. Not bad, but it's kind of short... Ah, you support KuroXRin? Fun fact: Kuro's name means "Black" in more the sense the color of her hair, the color of the shadows, and that she feels a bit sad that Rin doesn't recognize her feelings, but she cares a lot more about Rin's happiness than anything else, which would explain why she's so defensive over Rin...

This is a good fic! But Kodomo no Jikan finally has it's own category, so you should move this there.

I love Kodomo no Jikan 3 Wish it would update more.

This fanfiction should be in the "Misc. Anime" category (that's where anime fanfics without their own category go to).

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