Aww! The ending was soo cute! I loved this<3
Great job :]

I Am Now Your Biggest Fan

really awesome

loved it

x3

BORING ARE YOU A FREAKIN MORON?
IT WAS THE MOST INTERESTING LIVELY STORY I HAVE EVER READ
I LOVED IT A LOT

sequel please??! oh and sakura was being a little too blunt if ya know what i mean...

it was sort of...confusing in the begging ..um.. did naru-chan and sasu-kun die or are they just gone or is they on a misson all the time? see confusing

Aww... That was sweet... It was a little hard for me to follow at times, but I gave up on trying to firgure it out completely, I'm too tired, and just read it through. Now, I'm no big fan of Sakura, but I adore Kakashi, and I believe that this was a great story, beauticully placed together with realistic points. ^^

Scitah

The story is surprisingly realistic for a KakaSaku, which made me enjoy it more than usual. Both of them are fairly in character, as far as I can tell. Well done.

aw!
this is uberly cute!!
i think you should totally write a sequal!
=]

the order in which you put it is too confusing, i wasnt sure when this was happening and which event happened first... it was too...everywhere.. and personally it shouldnt be M rated. but i liked it.

loved it...sequel pls

it was a good story though the date thing was a little confusing. At first I thought it was random dates as time went by (as in from one year to the next) then realized it was all in the same year but you were back and forth between the dates

:o!

I liked it

those time alterations are good, i like them

keep working :)

That wasn't boring at all, that was great! One of the best KakaSaku stories out there, just because I think you kept them very in-character. Or as much as possible considering this probably won't happen in the manga (damn!) but very well written!

I think the date format is cool [:
Great one shot!
I loved it