Oh that was just too corny right at the end there.

OMG that was awsome! you have to do another chapter!! lol I don't usually read Zoro/tashigi but I admit this one was pretty good!

that was so damn sexy!!
Luv the end!
2 thumbs up sistah!!

That ending was so Corny! I can't believe you dared write that! Exquisite, simply fantastic.
This story was nice, it kept me going all the way to the end and I really enjoyed it.
I must admit, I was THIS close to just shutting down the computer and run of screaming when I saw the ZoSan interaction, but the promise of ZoTash later kept me going and I do not regret it.
The setting was authentic and you managed to get many one piece character innit without it seeming strained.
the only critique I can find is the online scenes. Both the pm and the chatroomscenes could be enhanced a bit, just typographically, I mean so you can tell the difference.
Anyhow, wonderful job.
Personally I really enjoy your writing, so I might overpraise you, but I'm happy having read this cute story, and if you're happy having received this praise, then everybody else can pretty much bugger off.

Yours Truly,
Immerkalt (now in German too)

Well done. For having a few elements I'm not fond of, your work did not disappoint! Great writing as always! :)