That was a really good story! I thought it was cute!! You should write another Holmes/Watson story!! You're really good at it!!

Such a great story! I loved it! It was amazingly written, and...just bloody fantastic!

You did an excellent job with it and I applaud you for that! Keep up the great work!!

It was very lovely story. Very emotional an heart wrenching. I'm glad they found each other finally. I'm hoping for sequel.

I loved this. a lot. I have never really commented any stories, but I feel you should get more reviews for this. I'm glad to finally see such a well written story about these too. Keep it up

Havelock Ellis!
i actually know who he is from reading gerald durrell... lol..
i thought that this was really well written - you must continue to write H/W slash! :D

I've just read this from start to finish. I loved it. However, I did feel the transformation from argument to sex in the last chapter went a bit quickly. We all know Holmes is a master of deduction, but if his faculties were as stilted by their relationship problems as was previously suggested, I feel it would have taken more convincing on Watson's part. Holmes is not a confident being in many respects. Other than that, brilliant. A few grammatical/spelling errors that I noticed. If you ever have need of a beta feel free to get in touch at my livejournal: soupyfirefly

soupy x

Wow...i cannot truly say I've read anything as good as this has been. It was amazing! I loved all the intilectual sides of it but also the way that everything was very well 'panned out' per se. It was very well ballanced story and I hope to read MUCH more of this great writing from other great stories in the future.

Simply loved it, very well written, a great work definitely.
Hope you'll write more fics of the same type. ;)
Favorited for sure!

Thank you oh so much! I had a really wonderful evening reading your story. I'm not a native English speaker, but your way with words kept me in raptures no less than story itself. It was fun and pleasure.
Austin connotations I appreciated. But Dr. Granger - was it an allusion to quite different work of literature?

Oh, i I've alvays seen hints in ACD canon ^_^

Amazing fic! Lovely characterisation, and very hot too. ;) I especially loved the scene where at Granger's club where Holmes has to leave in a daze - so evocative of how much it's affecting him that he cannot maintain his usual caution. Will finish here before I come over all fangirly. :)
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Fantastic story, with a surprising ending. I must ask, what age are you? It's just that there are many writers of many ages on this site, and I can't imagine you to be so very young. I really enjoyed the story, and hope you do many more like it.

Ah, this was well done. I enjoyed reading it very much! When reading Sherlock Holmes stories I'd always liked to think that something like this was going on between cases. Thanks for writing!

The beginning very efficiently brought up curiosity on how Holmes and Watson became such intimate chaps. Interestingly slipping from present, recent past, and yet even further in the past. The switch from Watson to Sherlock was at first strange as it so rarely if ever happens in canon (I may recall something vaguely) and Sherlock jumps right into it in a way that is somewhat startling. I must say, despite his dreadfully boring book on bees, he's quite a fluent writer. But soon the present dictating the past edges out and you forget you're not with them in the middle of it as often happens in the books. Quite captivating your attention.

Overall up there with some of the best this genre has to offer. So solid that I get the sense I've read the end of Dr. Watson's chronicles. And that just goes to show you how well the drama of solving a case blended with the romance of the story.

Bravo! Thank you for a fantastic read.

(p.s. am I the only one who gets confused how many times Watson sells his practice? *laughs*)

This story is excellent so far! I read your author's note and I'm sorry to see that more people aren't reviewing this fic. That is frustrating, but you should know that you have fans and I hope you keep writing.

An excellent and cleverly written story. I enjoyed it very much!