I've been looking for something to fill my itch for more 10th kingdom besides watching it again and again on Netflix. This story has great potential and I find it engaging already! Please write some more! The only criticisms I would say are pick a point of view and stick with it, or be more consistent when you do switch point of views so that it isn't so jarring to the reader. I think you've done an amazing job of getting the characters down pat - I mean Tony sounds like Tony, Wolf like Wolf and Virginia like Virginia - it's wonderful to read!

Please please please continue this! I am huge fan of 10K and really would love to know how you are going to continue this. Wolf is my favorite character and you have done fantasticly keeping him the same from the original.

Where was Jordanna in the last books (mini series)? It does not say how she came in this book. This chapter is good. You need to try and tell the readers where Jordanna is or where she came from. This book is okay.

Just finished watching the Tenth Kingdom miniseries on Netflix and fell in love with the story, characters, ... just everything! And Virginia's last line made me think that someone had created a televised sequel so I started researching. And I stumbled on your writing. It has definitely fed my need for the Tenth Kingdom. I like your use of first person and third person and the switching on and off between the two. You have captured the characters' essence. Especially that of Virginia and Wolf (all scratches at his temple and huff puffs). Thank you for this. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing! Good luck!

i love how you ended it nice job grat potential

One of the best book should make more ten movie very curiouse to what happen

Eeee I'm loving this, I used to watch this when I was younger and I just recently discovered it again, this is great! I know what it's like writing a story and then just leaving it because other things are more important (just look at mine!) but this has such promise! I'd love to read more!

Out of all the stories I have read thus far, yours has kept true to the story and more importantly the personalities of the characters. I love that. It shows how much you love the original story as we all do. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapters!
PS Don't worry about making them too long. Your writing skill is great and can handle the extra. This is how Simon Moore would have wrote it!

I love this! I haven't read the first book, but I just re-watched the movie. This is a great start of a second book. I would love to see it published! Can't wait for the next chapter!
By the way, don't worry if it's too long. Most of us are used to longer chapters!
Keep up the good work!

I look forward to not I look for.
Ps. Very good job.

I like it, I wonder what end would be with Jordana and Wendel. If Jordana will learn of origin, how it is possible change to a bird? How useful would be Finn. What troubles would do Virginia. And I look for that Wolf help them all. What interesting they learn in Silvermont, maybe about battle with Silverton. They could help them to see a big picture or solve their problems and men of Silvermont will help them with path to understand a big library wher they go. I look for other chapter. Thank you.

I have read ALL chapters and I only have one question. Why aren't they in print and in film already. Great job

08/2012 Just saw The Tenth Kingdom off of Netflix, searched for the book II and found this. Are you posting any more chapters?

2012, Just watched The Tenth Kingdom off of Netflix, found these from Kiarria Catt and You. Have you written any more or is this it?

Please do not stop writing! I am normally not a reader but I find myself enthralled by your writing and the story.