Excellent, just the writing I craved while reading the third book. I can't help but think if you had written it, it would have been a much more satisfying book.

This was absolutely STUNNING! Beyond amazing, actually. :) You're such a brilliant writer and you pen these characters so well, I feel like I've been sucked in to the books again! :D I've only just finished reading the third book today. And I was blown-away by the fierceness of how much it was killing Jace to love Clary and not be able to be with her. And I had the same reaction to that with this story. Just speechless with the power of it. :)

Thank you VERY much for sharing it!

this is an amazing story. i love it!

Oh, JACE. This is lovely. I really felt that blow when he realized that he wasn't the one marrying Clary. D: That's so sad.

This is gorgeous. Great job.

That was so sweet and so sad and so trippy. I love dream sequences, they're always so much fun.

I loved your gorgeous tale of poor, confused, love-sick Jace. Especially when Clary was going to marry Alec. That was funny.

Loved it.

-Maggie

o so sad. i really love the clary/jace pairing. why oh why do they have to be siblings?
nice work. i really liked it. :)

amazing! thats all i have to say.

OMGSH that was good! Do another one, pleasepleaseplease
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aah...the bliss of clary/jace...loved it!
can't see anything wrong w/it other than the Clary/Alec bit...

this made me cry so hard
its so sad
im obsessed with the mortal instruments
and i cant wait till city of ashes
i love jace and clary they belong together
and it makes me sad
anyways this was absolutely wonderful

You're a really good author you know that? ^_^ FAVOURITED! :D:D:D=D

God, Marcy, way to go to make me all teary-eyed! This was so very beautiful. I like how you made the chance that Clary may find someone else appear in the image of Alec here, making Jace's despair twice as strong. Poor Jace..

I LLOVVEE it!! it might be one of the best fanfictions!

awesome story. amzing job.