This was really good - I thought it was better than "An Insane Dream", this being more descriptive and all. Keep at it! :D

Lol. u seem to major in poems no? I read your other poem, I had to agree with the other reviewer, it seems mix and matched. I was even thinking it had something to do with Black Star...

Then this poem. It was much better, while there was cannibalistic senses on Stein in his experimental works, it certainly lean to madness. Shich is Stein. :D Keep working better!