 Blue Wolf2 2009-01-07 . chapter 1Very nice Master/Padawan moment. Very realistic too. It makes sense that he might think Obi-Wan is only doing it because his Master asked him to. I loved the last line. :) |
 2008-10-16 . chapter 1 xD I agree with you on that last line. He does look ridiculous in it, but then again...what about Obi-Wan and his Jedi mullet? |
 jicalazuxil 2008-10-16 . chapter 1aw... cute. loved it! |
 WhyMustIWrite 2008-10-12 . chapter 1Very nice. Overall, the first piece, Burden of Joy, had a stronger emotional appeal and ending. This one seemed to go through the conversation a bit too quickly.
Anakin being almost timid at the beginning was very charming. Then he shows his usual brazen self at the end. I like it. :) |
 go-stevie-go 2008-10-12 . chapter 1wow that was magnificent |
 pronker 2008-10-12 . chapter 1I liked this one a lot. It makes Anakin take on some of the characterization that we see in The Clone Wars tv show: not yet brazenly confident, and especially so when his Master is involved. |