Brilliant! You've brought them together really well. Nice writing, buddy.

Sweet! :]

It could be longer, events in the last paragraph happens too fast for me. In spite of that it's very good, I like, that you compare Neji&Hinata to the two poles of a magnet. It fits them soo well. I like your writting style also. It was your first Nejihina fic? Wow, it's really good. Write more about them next time

Ah.. I like how you keep comparing them. Some parts are cliche, but overall it is good. I love the first part.