'creative' thoughts indeed, eh? loved it! XD

I read this a while ago (it's a nice story but I was wondering if I got this wrong...'X plus Y squared plus Z squared, if X equals twelve, Y equals eight, and Z equals three
Well, that would mean 12(8x8)(3x3) 12649 85.

Not 86, right? or did I miss something.

Gee, I must sound like some math obsessed person. Reading a story and working on math problems.

Sorry, back on track. I like your story, I wonder what it's like, having your crush tutor you. (I don't a crush)

yea and gets somethin else goin...

GOD you sould do more like tath
the-ma-wii

P.S. They could be a little mor yaoi

lol . this was good. It was just so funny to read aswell.

L luurved this! RaWR! .

Kyaa! I would love it if my crush would tutor me like that xDD heheh. Sora is soo lucky. AWESOME story! LOve the idea tho, there is one little, measly mistake, I just point it out 'cause it's in the best scene *pout"Shyly, the brunt replied," The brunt? isn't it brunet? if it was meant to be brunt.. don't even tell me 'cause God, I would probably die out of embarrassment xD lol. Anyway. AMAZING! BRILLIANT!

*smiles* I'm just loving the one-shot but maybe you could write a sequel? but if you don't...that's fine XD but! i have one question, is the whole thing about Sora's repayment for tutoring by Riku going on through the whole thing? Cause this parahraph *Maybe it was a bad idea to accept Riku's proposal for a tutor. Maybe he could have picked someone else for his math tutor than his biggest crush ever. But ever since Riku decided kisses and dating was repayment for the tutor sessions, Sora didn't mind so much.* Seems like it's switching tenses, like has Riku kissed him before? Have they been going on dates? Or was this the first time thing...-Kyuubi

I want HIM to tudor me.
It's so pretty...*drool*

How absolutely adorable!

Love,

Faye Silo

I liked this, it was nice. The only thing that was a little odd was the kiss at the end. I don't know if the characters that you created, who were trying hard to hide their feelings, would kiss so nonchalantly at the end. But, still good.
Thanks for writing.

GASP! No fair! I want Riku as my tutor too! (whines:D Majorly cute, btw. :DD Who know that was what would trigger the math-ness of Sora's brain? xD

I'm pretty sure sora passed the math class with flying colors.

aw! adorable and totally out there and I LOVED IT! -passes out from studying too much- xD

... I'm afraid I had to skip all the mathematical stuff because it just me go Guh. I probably know how to do it, too... *pokes the Z
Variable! KIRA KNOWS THAT WORD.
... too bad I can't actually remember where from. Heehee. I officially declare this Kira's tutoring lesson for the day. I had to miss mine. Too bad my tutor is old... and nice, but old... and a little weird. xD
Why can't I have a nice, yummy hot one? With glasses like me? We could whine about it together!
You made my day so much more brighter, as per usual. :3

I would be Dead without you.

IT WAS GODLY.
Okay I must go now for Mother thinks I'm still watching TV.*isn't supposed to be on*

hahahahha aw this was cute silly long red lights hahahahha