*eye twitches*ANOTHER CHAPTER!!CONTINUE IT!

I sit and weep in sorrow for her beloved Duncan, though he's only my 3rd Favorite character. Please... continue.

Wow... That was, I don't know. Yeah, I could definitely tell that it was Duncan. It makes you think about driving more carefully. Even though this story was kinda depressing and... umm a little disturbing (with the head thing and all) it was a pretty good story.
Fleur

An excellent story. Please do continue with it, as I'd like very much to see what will happen.

heartbreaking.
Semper Fi

OMG CONTINUE!

Once again, good solid idea, but overall it could have been much better written. Add more description, and detail. It moved by way too fast, you should've slowed it down, maybe explain Duncan's pov a bit? And...not very disturbing.

Anyways, not bad.

to-oo sa-d-d (sob) wha-aa-aa!



*PL360*

It's ironic that I'm reviewing for your story. That's pretty good but very gory and kinda sad.

OH
MY
GOD.
AWSOME STORY!

wo.. that is just a bit disturbing... but im not grosed out by it