Great story, please do more on Scott and Nathan, the fact that for a long time his son is older than him and he brought him up for a while was an interesting concept the comics came up with.

awwwwwwwww good daddy

Very nice. You don't see many Scott stories willing to deal with his thoughts on Nathan as a child. You need to break it up into paragraphs though as it's hard to read. (also as a note for clarification: Scott and Maddy never got back together after Nathan was born.) Really enjoyed seeing Scott's thoughts on his son and brother.