It's a great story, but it has spelling errors up the wazoo. You should really fix those cause they're kind of distracting. But yea, other than that, it's great.

The depth of this is really strong. When I read things like this I get severely depressed because there are people out there with that state of mind. Even though it makes me sad I think this story is really great because it puts forth the emotion that a depressed person would have. I hope you continue to write : )

aww, that was so sad, it got got my eyes watery, but i liked it a lot, amazing work!^_^

I did'nt know naruto was emo