Profound. I like it. I have always wondered what everyone thought about him, when he suddenly changed his mind. He thought highly of himself.

Cool! Very cool! I've never read a Bible fic before, it's very interesting. Good poem, good job! :D

This is amazing! I really enjoyed reading it. In fact...I might just have to read it again.

I always thought Paul was cool. Great story.

Excellent! Well written, short, and right to the point. Maybe you could add a section about Barnabas trying to convince them otherwise?