This was a fantastic read, Brian is my favorite character by far and you got his character perfectly.

Oh this was absolutely brilliantly written! You captured the essence of Brian really well, and managed to get his character and mood and thoughts down to a T. Very VERY well written.

SD

You captured Brian so well! He's so bitter and angry-fantastic!

I just want to start by saying, I love that you did a piece like this. I think Brian is a wonderfully designed character and you pulled him off superbly. Beautifully written.

This is an amazing story. Very well done.