Yay!! You've updated! Can't wait already for the next chapter!
But before that, you ask what in my opinion may happen? I think that Dahlia should go after Miss Von Karma and show her that Wrigjt's and Edgewoth's fears are not unfounded.

Gah! The voice in Edgeworth's head is seriously creeping me out. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say that it's Dahlia, but I suppose I'll have to just wait and see. And of course, Trucy's as chipper and cute as ever. As for Franziska, I have to say that I'M impressed even if she's unimpressed. Seriously, she's like a female Indiana Jones with her whip skills. I can just see them all in this show down with a ghost and everyone's either cowering or putting on a brave face. Meanwhile, Fran would just go: "That's no ghost!" and whip the heck out of it. Anyway, good luck with the next chapter!

whoaa such a great story. I love the concept of it and i love your portrayal of Kristoph. xD possessive and twisted boyfriend haha and the epic save at the end of chapter 4<- now that was some pretty swet stuff.

loved your writing style. Slick and simple. Can't wait for MOAR xD

Just one thing to note: Referring as Apollo to be Phoenix's child. It's a minor thing, but technically not true. He just insisted on watching over him.

But anyways, this is just fabulous. It takes a lot to be able to take multiple characters and actually get them in character. Aside from Phoenix being a bit more like his younger self, I think that you have everyone down perfectly! (Not too mention everyone gets their fair share of 'screen time'.)

And bringing in Dahlia? Genius. Having her mess with Edgeworth? Even better. You are quite creative, and I am sorry that this review is long! To sum everything up, you deserve a cookie for this story. I cannot wait until the next chapter!

Yet again, a most fantastic chapter. It would be nice if everyone ended up in the same room until *someone* throws the lights on and then discovers they were set up...but that's a bit corny, don't you think? I wonder who forced Edgeworth to push and jump after Phoenix Wright but...well...I'll just read the next chapter. ^-^

Your story keeps getting better and better! Not only have you mixed romance into the mixing pot of terror which is the story, you also catch Franziska off her guard as she is aimed at by the mysterious ghost-puppet? And what has happened to dear Apollo and Trucy? What treachery has befallen the two siblings? Why would Kristoph hurt the 15-year-old magician anyway? Yet again, (sorry if I'm copying you, Gumshoe) the plot, and the mystery, thickens!

I'm definetely impressed (by the story) yet again, and the voice that is assumingly Dahlia's poses another mystery. Too bad Franziska isn't enjoying the adventure, but I guess that manor would be unimpressive to her. Their manor is far grander, she would have thought, I suppose! Wonder...could Kristoph really make an earthquake happen, all just to frighten one fo the visitors..? Hm...^-^

It was a very good chapter again. Seems Kristoph has even more mysteries to provide to the already-nervous parties. And what about Franziska and Gumshoe? No one worries about them? I pity the scruffy, underpaid detective who has to get whipped by the prestiged prosecuter for him to lead the way. ^-^

Very impressive. From the start of the story, you have already captured the minds of and intimidated the readers. Also, you pose the questions, "What will happen to the gang? What is Kristoph plotting to do? What is the reward if they pursue the mission?" It is a very good story plot, and as Gumshoe says, "The plot thickens!" 'o'

Hey! You updated! 8D I was wondering when you were going to get around to it. . .

Poor Edgeworth. I assume he's possessed by Dahlia or something? It'd explain his newfound strength and that voice in his head that wants Phoenix to die, anyway. XD

Anyway, update soon?

Awesome job! Somehow, I imagine the voice that Edgy is hearing to sound like Voldemort's voice from Harry Potter. I can so see that happening. Awesome job! I thought that Franzie hated foolish things. I would bet that Disney World would be foolish in her opinion. Lol. Update soon! The chapter was worth the wait.

Yay Edgey gone crazy now! But really, what will happen next? *twilight zone* Can't wait to find out ^^

I haven't read a good horror fic ever. *laughs* Good job.

The amount of drama in this is horrifying to the highest measure but its impossible not to want more.

God, I love your fics.

Wow, I've read stories with this idea before ( I mean Wright and Co. going into a haunted house) but, wow. That puppet was probably the scariest thing though. :3 Here's a couple of ideas: 1) von Karma gets kidnapped 2)Trucy is held hostage by Dahlia Hope that helps!