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roqueclasique
2009-06-03 . chapter 37
WHAT.
Okay, wow. Bunnies, and drabbles, and AWESOME and wow. That was so fantastic! And to the A/N at the very end I say PSHAW, because telling 100 words of a story at a time is still pretty goshdarn impressive, if you ask me.
Darkyu
2009-03-23 . chapter 37
I'm not going to lie, I don't really like drabbles, but still, look at me, reading 37 drabbles and likeing them. Especially the end. Tough, I would rather read this in a full long story way.

I'll go and check your other storys!

Thank you!
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 37
Ok, this is my absolute fav so far. Love it, love it. Love how you write the boys anticipated each other, love Dean's feeling of 'safe' in the Impala even though he was mostly out for the count, love the whole 'lucky shot' conversation (very creative btw) And of course, you have every HunterGirl in the palm of your hand with the J-B thing. Hilarious ending, a very smooth tie in for your main plot and flashbacks and bunny theme, all in one line - very cool.
And drabble-semantics *pft* Poetic licence!! Screwed up? No way, this has been one hellova creative ride - my seatbelt is still buckled up tight!!
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 36
That thing poisoned our boy!! Close call! Even though this was a Dean pov, you leave no room to doubt Sam's panic. The Dean snark to end was just priceless, fan-freakin-tastic!!
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 35
How *good* is that analogy? "It was worse than Dean talking in his sleep"!! I am cracking up here! The idea that Dean's slumbered mumblings fit in the same category as cross breeding monsters!! Too funny. OK...I've got a hold...now I'll be serious...Yep, Bobby is gonna be none too happy with this development, it's gonna open a whole new can of supernatural worms. And I'm still not over how you have our gentle Sam all business and vigilant as he rescues his brother *sigh*
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 34
"Tucking his brother protectively in against him, Sam started for safety once more, scanning the woods for unwelcome guests" - beautiful, just love how you give us protective little bro and fierce hunter in one sentence. Awesomeness galore. And oh boy, Dean sure is feeling like sh!t isn't he? You still have me on the edge of my seat with your drabble motage, it's a great ride.
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 33
Woah, the urgency and cruelty of the boys existence just oozes from the pores of this piece. Your description of Sam's hold around Dean's injuries paints a graphic but gentle picture in our heads. Yes, get them out of there!! We all feel the safety of the Impala as strongly as the brothers and you ending with this ramps up the urgency. Great work, heading for the 'next' button with trembling fingers...
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 32
I am really loving Dean's protective streak at the bunny. The fact that Dean is so fierce and passionate about whatever he is protecting is not a surprise and I like the way you fit that with everything we know about this man to be true. The whole concussed/nursing injuries beat to this fic was a stark reminder of the serious with the cute and I liked that aspect to this drabble as well.
Hey, hope you are travelling better in all things real life. Thinking of you.
Cookie6
2009-02-19 . chapter 31
Ew alright! I'm with Sam, grossest theory ever. And just what is Dean watching on YouTube? (you know we're all gonna search to find it dontchya?!) I so love the backwards and forwards banter you write, it feels so right about how in sync these brothers are. I especially love Sam's "“How hard did you hit your head? And how many times?” at Dean's apparent randomness. But yeah, when are we gonna learn, randomness not, hunter brain on.
And hey, please don't feel you have to respond to all my reviews. I'm cool with r&r-ing as you go.
Katrin Van Helsing
2009-02-13 . chapter 37
I loved it
InSecret
2009-02-12 . chapter 37
Meh, rules, I liked this :) Sorry I'm reviewing so far behind time. Lack of internet'll do that to you. Sigh. But it's back. And this is cute. And Dean is dreamy. I think a drawn out m-m-m is appropriate here. Ok. I'm done. Nice work, as always.
Twinchy
2009-02-09 . chapter 37
That was a marvelous, well-written and fitting end to the story, deangirl.

I really liked your idea of them being back in the motel days later and trading barbs back and forth about how and why they finally succeeded in getting away (complete with a lovely "bit**/jer*" moment).

I almost fell off my chair with squee at your easily threading this parent-multi-drabble to the bunnie-outsourced one. *beams*
Yammy1983
2009-02-09 . chapter 37
loved how you ended it!

perhabs there could be a new story where every chapter got 100 words ;-)
DeansBabyBird
2009-02-09 . chapter 37
DeanGirl.
Gonna miss your sweet bunnies and sweet Winchester whumpage. Thank you for the lovely drabbles. DBB x
PADavis
2009-02-08 . chapter 37
Oh hon, I'm sure that wasn't aimed at you. Unless it was aimed at Muffy and me? Nah. We have enough trouble getting participants to remember only 100 words.

I love this though. I really do like how you wrapped it up. That final line was perfect.

Phoebe
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