Criticism. You wrote 'are correct' as 'arecorrect' but I guess that is forgivable. You're lucky I'm not feeling as grammar-geeky as I usually am. Other than that, though, it's totally god!

*sniggers* Cool. >:3

So cute and romantic! My new top fave! Course im just a sucker for MarthxZelda but this just takes the cake! MORE! MORE! I NEED more! Heehee... Your great writer and i seriously want some new zeldaxMarth fics plz

short and effective. beautifully executed

That was the shortest story I ever read. :O
But I like it. *favs*

lol poor IkeXD Marth's gonna get some laterX3

Even though it was short, it was incredibly cute. It had the teasing sexual humor in it as well which is always enjoyable. Great writing. Keep it up!

I lurve you. This makes me want a Marth of my very own to arrest and do with as I please. Saucy, saucy Zelda xD

LOL. Love it.

Good Job! I can only imagine Ike's face as he understood what was going on.

:D Oh, what fun they will have tonight! This is a very good story, and a nice addition to the MarthxZelda fandom!

Hehe..Seems like something they would do, too. And your comment at the end only made it better. Oh, poor Ike..
It was cute, I thought; then again I'm a sucker for MarthZelda. Write more!

Hahaha! That was funny and cute! XDD The ending was hilarious. Looks like Marth will be having a 'fun' punishment. LOL! XD -ish dirty-minded-

The only thing I'll say is that it'd better if you uppercased your title. Otherwise, I like the writing style. Great job! =]