|Reviews for Ascendio|
| Marie Knight 7/11/11 . chapter 4
It's very well written and it is more realistic than the ones that I normally read...I only with u'd written more...It is very very good
| Rai 7/17/09 . chapter 3
Enjoyed what you've written so far (up to Chapter 3). Just a Grammar nitpick.
Minerva would not say"Neither did me", She'd mor likely say "Neither did I"
| Element's Sole Protector 6/26/09 . chapter 4
I love this fic! I think you're doing a good job with it being realistic and heartfelt. I love how Severus and Albus looked like they wanted to rip Vernon Dursley into very small pieces. ;)
(And boy, do I understand drama!)
I also think it's pretty interesting that Lily asked Minerva about blood sacrifices. I've seen Harry-with-a-lisp once before (the poor baby!), but that was something I had not seen. Points for originality!
| kiri268 6/23/09 . chapter 4
I hope your friend makes it to missouri alright and my prayers go out to her for a safe journey. I love your story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.
| cyiusblack 6/23/09 . chapter 4
| pennypotter128 6/22/09 . chapter 4
hey you have got to write more this stry cannot stay incomplete plz wrte mre
| Saavik13 6/22/09 . chapter 4
good update. worth the wait.
| CrystalPheonixEyes 6/22/09 . chapter 4
Prayers are on their way! 3 Remember He is always there for you and that He loves you unconditionally.
"I call on you, O God, for you will answer me, give me ear and hear my prayer." -Ps 17:6
I also would like to say that I love this story. I hope that you continue to update when you are able. I am curious as to whay stupid idea the ministry is going to come up with. Hahaha
| 10thWeasley 6/22/09 . chapter 4
hey, Shouldn't "We’ll take care of name pronouncing later" be "We’ll take care of name pronunciation later"? Also one thing that confused me was you kinda switched between sayin "is" and "was".
Mrs. Dursley takes this brief moment to examine their possible murderers.
Then he grimaced as he remembered what had occurred hours ago
I'll be praying for your friend, prayer is definitely something I belief in.
| HermioneG11 6/22/09 . chapter 4
I really enjoy stories of this theme and it seems that you might be taking this in a different direction than others like it. However, I think you could really benefit from getting a beta-reader. You have quite a few grammar issues, most notably verb agreement and syntax. I saw in another review that someone offered to beta for you, but just so you know I am also available. If you're interested I hava a beta profile available through my profile page.
Anyway, Happy writing! I hope that your friend gets better and you'll be able to continue updating soon.
| Blueowl 6/22/09 . chapter 4
I would suggest simply getting a beta reader. I found some typos and such, but honestly don't feel like going back to find them to point them out.
If you need a beta reader, I'm willing to serve if you're interested, just know I have college in the fall and it may take a few days for me to return the part to you.
Anyway, other than the typos, good part, glad they got Harry out of there and he knows he's safe. Hope they realize the obvious concerning who should watch over Harry now before the Ministry tries to get involved.
Looking forward to more.
| All The Pretty Horses 4/15/09 . chapter 2
Good chapter. I really like nice Dudley and I hope he plays a part in the rest of the story.
| PunkZZZ 4/14/09 . chapter 3
YAY! Chapter the second. *smiles* 'Twas good. Well, somewhat depressing what with child abuse, but good anyways . . . yeah, gonna stop rambling.
Good job! :)
| IchigoRenji 4/14/09 . chapter 3
4 words: I. LOVE. THIS. FIC!
Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
| minerva's-kitten 4/14/09 . chapter 3
Please update soon this was awesome! I hope you have Minerva has his mother.