nice story. Im working on some miyuki chan fan fiction myself. Are there any good places to send sample chapters? I've completed a story already.

hey if you ever make another one where animal girls go after miyuki i suggest australian animal girls like a girl with the ears tail and pouch of a kangaroo.

Wow! It was really funny at the end! How Miyuki-Chan was smiling until she noticed the zoo was empty, except for her and a voice purring, "Oh, Miyuki-Chan…"

This story was funny. I like it.

it was funny, but my overall reaction was wtf?