i would say destructive fingers, not destroying fingers. over all this is quite a good story, a love the series, and this is a fantastic addition to the sky breaker series. I have always wondered about what Grunnel was like, and now I know, sort of. I hope there is more to come!

Nice fic :) I was always interested in what sort of character Grunnel had been. I think he worked on his invention while airborn though, rather than finish it before he left. Nice work.

even tho it was very well written, it needed more of a plot even if it wiz just a one shot

o this looks promising...

i didn't see any mistakes in this chapter. but maybe make chapters longer in the future?