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Mikiramen
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
*sniff**sniff* I feel so sorry for Mikan. This chapter was so sad. Update soon, I want to see how thinks turn out.
IAmTheBattleMaiden
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
Wow. Good job with the angst. I wonder how things will turn out? Update soon, please. You know, when you've finished with the devil... ^_^


Ja-ne! ^_-
tina1061
2008-11-27 . chapter 1
If I were Mikan, I would've punch someone (Natsume) or something (a wall). If you were her, what would you do?

PS: if you're really angry at someone, try punching a wall. Trust me, it helps...

PSS: After you punch the wall, your hand will have hurt a litte... a lot if you punch it as hard as you can...
ayumistar
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
nice
michiyo
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
This chapter is too sad. Poor Mikan.I got teary eye just by reading it.
I hate Natsume at the end even if he doesn't mean it.

Please update soon.
chris3169512
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
T_T Themes like these never fail to make me emotional...
I don't like Natsume at the end... He could've been kinder about it... Which made me even more emotional T_T
Keep up he good work!
I hope you can update soon!
Youichiix33
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
aw this was such a sad chapter >< >< POOR POOR MIKAN! everyone is so mean... ): my mood is all depressed now. I agree, everyone HAS bullied before, its something that cant be avoided. A lot of the time people don't realize it, but it happens. Poor mikan ): i really want to cry for her

update soon!

You-chii
EAnIL
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
Well this is one of the best fic here i seen so far and hope that you update ASAP!

and yeah your right about bulling it will exist till the end of time and to add to that it is a part of Human dark nature.
storylover1234
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
T_T the story was so sad! and HOW CUD NATSUME! I'M SO DISSAPOINTED IN YOU! -cries more- keep on writin! lol the devil homework...i think...ehe... Luv ya!
~always storylover1234~
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