Yeah, set the bad spellers in their places! Yeah!

Wow. That was so dark, so deep, so sad, so funny. It's a masterpice.

Burn! See the only time you can truly burn someone is if you're smart or the person is stupid and has no clue what either of them are saying! You are smart! You would rather outwit someone than run! You, my friend, are cool in my world!

Awesome story! And all you runny-mouthed **, LET IT GO!! Gosh.
1. It's a story.
2. If you really are Christian/Mormon/Whatever you should know that God wants you to let people BE and believe what they wanna believe. If you go on like this, you have a chance in hell just as the next "bad religions".

omg that is like so sad.
omg im like crying.

WENTS THE NEXT CHAPTER

Any existence in which there is no Duncan/Courtney is a sad existence indeed. :(

This was really sad. Very good, but depressing.

And personally, I apologize for all the idiotic comments you've been left. I understand how it feels to be asked for the second part to a one-shot...
It's a road down which I never want to travel again. *sigh*

Anyways, to conclude, this was a really good story. Like one of your reviewers said, just a little bit more detail would make this perfect! :)

Don't you just hate it when people say update when you clearly say 'One-shot'? I thought it was good but I would have changed some stuff (making it a bit more detailed) but that doesn't matter because its yours.

Catholics for the win! lol (i hope that doesn't offend anyone... *side steps away*
I hate when people get all pissy about religous things in one-shots or short stories but they are all fools (at least those who make a big deal of religion)...

But yeah i liked it and since you said you will be continuing it might as well put an alert on it.

Lastly (lol) you write moderatly morbid like me! I don't feel alone anymore!

wow! I hate when people get confused with catholic and christian ... i am catholic so the story came to me a lot better (religion classes for 9 years pay off... really, it does).

True people need to get the idea of ONE-shot! there is a reason for the word ONE in there! One my one-shot a couple people asked if i would continue it...

I could guess who the people are but you already told me! hahah i have a cheat sheet!

"Only I and a few friends know they're real identity."

Those who live in glass houses shouldn't throw stones, and all that. Not that you're wrong, and I of all people know that everyone's prone to typos. Just saying.

And for the record, can you really pinpoint heaven's exact location?

Because I Enjoy Advocating for the Devil,
SushiChica

you take forever

i love the story seriousely but next chapter its by a long time i waiting

next chapter and don tell me wrter block

very touching but next chapter
please

love the story but make the second chapter already