This story and it's prequel are so awesome!

Holy crow!

I love that Edward has been thinking about Jasper's words/thoughts all through the school day.

I love that Jasper is the instigator; it seems like most of the J/E slash I've read, it's always Edward being aggressive. How hot is it when Jasper pushes Edward against the island and asks if he's excited? HOT.

Whew, lovely, lovely lemony goodness.

Woman, I say we get a petition going to give you Dominant Jasper. Steph never played with him to ANY of the potential you have brought out!