 witchsbroom 2009-12-02 . chapter 6Oh my Snape still hasn't figured out that his house elf was the problem with Harry's homework and other thinks going wrong and not Harry's fault. Well at least they seem to get along when brewing potions. Now to throw a monkey in the mix by adding Draco for 2 weeks thinks will sure be intersting at Snape Manor maybe he'll finally see Harry for how he is and have a long talk with the house-elf about his ward |
 Terri Granger-Durham 2009-11-18 . chapter 6I sincerely hope the Draco in this fic is a nice kid. I also hope Snape will eventually decide he can't trust anything Harry says, and use legilimency. Then again, when he finds out the truth, how's Albus going to react? Especially when he finds out Harry didn't lie? Poor Harry. Very in character people, although I have to admit that I sometimes have trouble seeing Snape as quite so venemous. Then again, I, like Dumbledore, insist on seeing the best in people. More soon, please. |
 Gakusangi 2009-11-14 . chapter 6Okay, I've been reading along for a little while now, and I must say that this story is superb! I've enjoyed every moment of it. The characters are 'in-charater' the setting is well described, and dare I say...Rowling-ish in their descriptions while still maintaining a uniqueness to them that makes it 'you'. I'm very anxious to see what direction you take with this one, and I hope to see an update in the near furture.
~Gaku |
 Miz636 2009-11-12 . chapter 6This story is quite different from any other I've read and that makes it quite enjoyable. I like how you've made it so that Snape doesn't believe Harry mostly because of his father. It fits in with the books quite well, personality-wise. I also like how you're keeping it quite canon, which is something most cannot do in a story like this. I can't wait to see what happens when Draco comes as this will change what happens at Hogwarts, most likely. |
 The cat lady 2009-11-09 . chapter 6 i love it! i always knew if snape had the chance, he'd make harry's home life miserable. but i do hope someone shows him the truth someday. update soon! |
 cyiusblack 2009-11-09 . chapter 6update soon |
 Arbitrary Doom 2009-11-06 . chapter 6...great fic!...a bit thick on the angst for my taste...but i couldnt stop reading...wonderful job and please continue... |
 serena23 2009-11-04 . chapter 6If I was Harry I would ask if there is a way to watch memories; then tell snape to watch them. Please update. |
 JennyJenkins 2009-11-01 . chapter 6 OOHH - Guesses!
Is Draco going to unveil the horrible Noddy - no way a house-elf could pull one over on a Malfoy.
Will they get along?
Will Dumbledore visit again?
Update soon! |
 trichster 2009-11-01 . chapter 6 Finally, an update. I was hoping this might be the chapter where Snape realizes what an ** he's been, but at least he's not quite as nasty as before. I hope Draco and him are going to be friends, maybe he could find out what Noddy has done and tell Snape. Hope you don't keep us waiting for the next chapter. |
 Asterix Tutnix 2009-11-01 . chapter 6Oh, so good to see you're back in the HP universe! I have really been missing your updates!
I liked this latest chapter. True, not much has happened, but as usual your fantastic description of Harry's thoughts make the reading worthwile, without getting boring even for a moment. For example I liked when Harry fetched the heavy cauldron lid and feltlike a warrior with a shield.
And now Draco.I am reaaly curious how this is going to turn out, so please update soon... |
 ams71080 2009-10-30 . chapter 6Nice chapter.
Amber |
 RainyDays87 2009-10-29 . chapter 6snape sucks. 'nough said |
 shadowwolf 2009-10-28 . chapter 6 I'll be looking out for your story so I can continue to read it. :) |
 EtherealDeath 2009-10-28 . chapter 6Very good but I wish you would either update more often or write more in each chapter. But it's a very good plot |