story sucked

Phew. That could've gone a lot worse, in my opinion. . .

ANYWAY! I liked it. 'I never meant to blow anything up.' xD

I'm very glad you updated. :)

Oh no Two-Bit, give him another chance after all, he didnt MEAN to blow up your car. = ]

Nice little curve ball, there, at the end. "You're eighteen years too late." I thought - oh great, everything is going to be all fine and dandy all of a sudden. But, nup pal, Two-Bit is still being . . . Well, Two-Bit.

Haha, way to keep us on our toes.

Lovely. I liked it a lot, and I'm glad you gave 'Jesse' a voice in this story. We didn't know his story, and at least we can see where he's coming from now.

Will we find out why he left in the next chapter? Well, we'll find out I guess. . .

--Tabby

God, is Jesse unlucky or what? To get back in Two-bit and his mom's good books he's going to have to save the world or something!

God, he really has the WORST luck.

Ah, I love this line:

“Stop. I had a father; his name was Darrel Curtis Senior.”
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LOL. I remember a line like that from 'Spider-Man'. You probably didn't get it from there, but it just reminded me of it. :)

Once again, poor Jesse! They were getting along alright, and then BAM!

Wow.

Well. Update soon, alright?

~TNS

Two-bit's dad...
blew up the house?

Wow.
Never saw that coming.

woah...intense. that's just so depressing! was Two-Bit's mom inside? I must know! Update!

wow, Two-Bit's dad needs to GET A CLUE!! i mean come on, dude, how hard is it to figure you're out you're gonna get beat up if you hang around? anyway, i really really like this story, it's got the right amount of funny and drama in it i think. please update it soon!

I feel bad for Jesse. ): He's really trying hard, isn't he?

I mean, I don't blame Two-bit and Helen for hating him, but we know his side too, and that makes me fel bad for him. . .

Update soon!

~TNS

this is amazing! the emotions seem so real, too... this is simply one of the best things I've read- keep it up! :D

Yikes! That was awful and mean on so many levels. What about Jesse's hand? He has to get it looked at or something, right?

Please update soon. I want this review to be longer, but I'm not sure what else to say. It was wonderful (as usual). :)

Bye!

~TNS

Woah. That was really intense. Short, sweet, totally shocking. You really captured Dally, and I can also feel Two-Bit's anger towards his dad. Though, anger may be too light of a word. Anyway, good job and keep it up.

Oh. Wow. I don't know how I should say this. I just am loving this story so much. (:

It's just great! I love seeing what Two-bit's dad is like, and how he's trying to make things right, but can't. Are we ever going to see what made him go away in the first place?

And Two-bit trying to figure out what the heck is going on.

Well. I just really like it. A. LOT.

Good job!

~TNS

I love this!
It's realistic, and I could actually picture this going on!
Good Job!

Update soon :)