oh man you made me cry. it was so beautiful

Sad story but very well written. Great work with it!

... I like it.

That's about all your getting outta me for the story. I was really not impressed with the ending, I would have been if I didn't know the reason for this story. But since I do I don't much care for it.

It actually ticked me off quite a bit. Not to say I'm mad at you or anything- or that this is a flame, because its not. I like the story, don't get me wrong. But I'd enjoy the story more had I not known the reason behind it.

And the fact you called yourself a monster? I'm completely and totally pissed at you for that. Yet, I'm not mad at you entirely.. which is odd.

But Sam, get out of the angst, honestly. Just.. step out of it for awhile. Finish whatever your writing now (The chapter story) and just get out of it.

I'd like to see some happier things.

You're rather lucky "whose line is it anyway" is cheering me up greatly, friend.

You know how much I despise my friend's knocking themselves. Don't you think you should NOT put it in things you wish for me to read?

I like the story Sam.I don't like the inspiration for it. I don't care for the ending. And I don't care for your closing statement, either.

But overall.. I like the story.

and remember- this is not a flame. this is just me reading something I liked, but was ruined after I figured out what the hell you were talking about.

Slightly ticked, but still enjoying your stories,

Nails

F*ck Sam, you almost made me cry. Almost... not quite.

Man, all these personal fics are making me feel all creepy inside. I don't like being potrayed in fics, it makes me feel like crap.

*shifty eyes*

I like the other one better.

Again, I don't know what to say anymore. I really wanna be friends, I do. And I hope it works out, but like I said before, you have to try too. I think I could be willing to forget about things,unfortunately though some people don't think I should. But I'll try, I'll always try I guess.

-

So let me try to explain something. In my eyes, we'er still friends. But it's like starting over. You're no longer at the top like you were for oh so long. You're with everyone else, Destini, Clayton and them. You're right, in your absense Leanne has become the one I can count on. Because she always wants to hang out with me, she's always there, when you weren't. So do you really blame me for that fact? So let's try to return to normal, it won't quite be the same, because things have changed, because you did disappear over stupid feelings of jealousy. So let's try our best and maybe I can learn to sleep at night again. The wall is getting pretty boring to look at.

Samaloo, hun, you are not a monster.

You know? This fic would've made me cry, had I not known the background story.

Did Roxas jump into a river and drown? 'slip and fall into a river'? -sadface-

So very sad.

It makes me ache for you and wish that I could fix things between you and Sarah... but I cannot. -gives another big hug, that ffn better not eat-

It'll be okay, really it will. If you are destined to be friends with her, then you will get through this and hopefully things will be the way they were again.

Wonderful job once again Samaloo.

Love always,

An-chan

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What is left of me without you? I don't know what's real without you, how can I exist without you?

Another one? I don't know what to say. I wish there was something I could. I hate seeing people hurt.

Luna

ohmygod. I'm actually crying while I write this. D:

Why do your stories always make me tear up? All of them do. This one especially!

It was soo sad. I can't think of any other way to say it.

D: well written and amazingly sad. Congrats on successfully making me cry, again!