These lines made this fic for me:

"And then there were a series of events that Sasuke intended to keep locked away in his mind for the rest of his existence.

He’d spent a great deal of time in his room after that. He was pained, horrified, distraught and so unbearably embarrassed."

I'm liking your characterisation of Orochimaru in this. He oozes evil from every pore. Excellent stuff.

Love. This.

ohh, That's creepy!
I love it!

If only Orochimaru knew that Sasuke was now friends with a god...

As for the slaughtering of the clan thingy, Sasuke can't really be planing the death of Kohana, could he?

Nicely creepy. I really liked how you never actually stated *what* Orochimaru did to Sasuke, and left that up to readers imagination (because Lord knows our imaginations can come up with some pretty twisted things with the right prompts--like candles).

I also liked his observations regarding Kabuto:

"One minute he was cutting your spleen out with a rusty spoon, the next he was smiling that odd smile and trying to make you feel better."

Honestly, Kabuto trying to be sympathetic is also really creepy. But I liked the rusty spoon thing (lol).

Sasuke's reminicing of his old team makes me wish/hope we'll see something of them in your 'Okami' story. Okay, maybe not their physical prescence, but if Sasuke's going to grow as a person, he's gonna have to talk about them and what they meant to him to Ammy and Issun (or at least Ammy) sooner or later.

Have a good day!