OH! This is so...wow. Amazing. Very raw. Very beautiful. I loved every bit of this. I agree. Purgatory can totally turn you upside down. :) But really, it fits perfectly with what you were getting at even in the first chapter. It's exactly their problem, and he has got to get that. I really enjoyed this. Great work. :)

That was really good! I thought the characters were spot on - it wasn't too fluffy but it had some fluff. It had just the right amount of angst for these two. Keep it up!

That was awesome!

Great job with this. I love it!

Snyder

Intense! Great story.

AMAZING... I love it. It's perfect. You gave me something to really smile about here and I had previosuly been having a pretty shitty day. Amazing how a REALLY good B/A ship can change my mood.

I could read this forever. Beautiful chapter. Can not wait for more!

Goren and Eames perfection! Intense chapter but very rewarding. Love the way they walk back to his apartment like that.

Excellent - loved it - fantastic last line!

Thank you so much for writing another amazing chapter to your incredible story! I really like how Alex got scared after she told him she loved him and tried to run away! Thank you for having Bobby follow her! Please write more soon! I really love this story!

YEEHA!

wow, interesting start. thanks for sharing, I hope you update soon!

:O This is such an amazing fic! Addictive even! I love it! Any chance of anymore CI fics?

Great job! I can't wait for more.

Very well done. Looking forward to the second part.