Reviews for Absence
redleaveshavefallen 7/20/09 . chapter 1
This is really touching. I absolutely loved it. It's a little unclear at times, but I love how you connect everything and how you describe everything, it's really, really sweet. I cried while reading it.
burned out from exhaustion 7/16/09 . chapter 1
Ah, my eyes are stinging! This was amazing. Really, really fantastic. Great job - I love it.
manhattan martini 6/24/09 . chapter 1
This made me sniffle and cry my eyes out.

I adored it.

Great job.
Swing-21 5/27/09 . chapter 1
So... heartbreakingly... beautiful.

I'm all teary-eyed now...
Summer Memory 3/29/09 . chapter 1
You don't have any idea how you've made really happy reading this fic,do you.?

I cried at the prologue of kh2, cursing squenix for erasing roxas existence like that.. And i just happen to love the friendship of haynerxroxas,(not in that way,though) and this fic is kinda made up for it, telling about the trio in roxas' absence..I could feel my heart clench when reading it..Ah,just wonderful, I love it. A lot. LOVE (forgive me for this piece of junk review..i'm not native to english..)
AkitoTsubaki 3/27/09 . chapter 1
;3;

Poor Hayner. This was really heart-wrenching.
Orodruin 3/5/09 . chapter 1
Awesome, I loved it. It was so sad, captures a lot of the sadness I felt when Roxas disappeared in the game. I went back to Twilight Town way more than was necessary just to indulge in the bittersweet memories... a little pathetic, maybe, but it was probably the saddest scene in a video game I've ever seen. And I love the way you capture the emotion in this.
crimson-obsidian-rose 1/17/09 . chapter 1
Oh wow, this is so amazing, so beautiful, so... sentimental. I love the emotions that are in here, the longing that Hayner feels, and Olette and Pence too, for someone that they don't even really know anymore. The way that Roxas' space is still there, even though he's not, it's how always felt like the Twilight Town gang will be after Roxas goes. He is more important to that group than most people realize, and it's nice to see how you captured the post-absence period of Roxas.

I especially loved the off-center photos, for some reason.

crimson-obsidian-rose
Lil Tanuki 1/11/09 . chapter 1
I don't know what to say besides, absolutely beautiful. The end had my eyes watering.
Lelek 12/27/08 . chapter 1
Oh, this is brilliant. The prologue of KHII made me cry, too, and not enough people touch on why it's so sad. I want to hug Hayner, and Sora, too, because he's so close, but not quite able to understand. And the way Roxas is so present throughout is just perfect. Lovely, lovely work.
Kaoru Gal 12/3/08 . chapter 1
I love Roxas... this was so sad and pretty. I always felt bad for Roxas
DooBaaDee 12/1/08 . chapter 1
It's been awhile since i've cried reading a fanfic.
Jayrin Paige 11/24/08 . chapter 1
Great story, loved how you mentioned how they all in some way missed Roxas!
Rubie 11/21/08 . chapter 1
TT_TT

I..

There are almost no words for this. I'm left speechless in the absolute best way possible. I can hardly recall how many times during the play of KHII that I would just set the controls down and just stare at the screen. I would always end up thinking about how sad it was for Hayner, Pence, and Olette. How unfair it was for them to lose their friend.

Also, this story paired with "Name" by the Goo Goo Dolls was almost too much.

You had me in tears at the end.

Bravo.
13loves8loves9loves6 11/11/08 . chapter 1
aw poor Hayner... ahahah what the crap ya know i think that was the most depressing part of KH II...the face that the Twilight gang totally forgot Roxas but like...didnt...this is making me sad ahahah AWW! with the pictures i think that's the saddest thing ive ever heard hahahha poor Hayner leaning on someone who isnt there hhahha aw *tears* the little wrist bump! wah...oh man if that had happened in the game i think i would have cried like woah hhaha WAH! *cries* hahah this was really cute and sad and col
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