oh, my! Lovely!

I loved the style you did this in. It was so different to the usual. It made it really interesting! :D

Awesome. There needs to be more DiR fic around.

I found a couple of grammatical errors, but nothing huge. This is the sort of Will/Bran I -love- to read. Yay for happy endings!

~Murf

You have a good little story! I know what you mean about the small but proud readers of DiR, I think what needs to be done is that a weekly series would be able to recover the name of the dark is rising after the horrible movie! Anyway awesome second story!

I love DiR! I'd love to see more fics. Yours was great!

YAY! DiR fic for my birthday is awesome.

I do rather enjoy it. Obviously, it was very condensed, and in some ways it suffers from that. It would be nice to continue this with greater detail in the passages. In fact, you may consider writing this in screenplay format - it would work better as scenes, I think.

Anyway, enough rambling from me.

THANK YOU!

Well this is the first DIR fafic I ever read. I just finished reading it yesterday. It was so awesome. I really like this story but what does 'dewin' and 'cariad' mean?

THis was slightly too shrot for my taste, I admit, but very well done. You could have elaborated a bit on the tension in the last part, but... meh, I can't really criticise, because I enjoyed reading this a LOT.
Keep writing ;)

Aw, sweet.

Do you know what it is that I most like about being myself again, Cariad? ... Being myself with you.

That's such a lovely line. I think it rings true for Bran in canon, too, because Will's very much the first person who's taken him on his own terms.

Lovely!