 dfsdf 2008-12-04 . chapter 1 Wow. So, the guy was actually a reprogrammed T-8? Interesting.
Btw, who was the woman following Mack? Was it Cameron or Sarah? |
 Psycho Tangerine 2008-11-30 . chapter 1That's a very interesting origin for Mack. Nicely done. |
 monkeerangerfan 2008-10-18 . chapter 1this was really interesting. |
 rapunzl 2008-10-15 . chapter 1Wow. What an insightful, interesting way to spin Mack's life/creation. It works really well as a stand alone piece, but if you ever considered continuing, I'm sure you'd have a following. :) |
 GinaStar 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Well done!! ;) loved it!! |
 Crazy Joe 2008-10-13 . chapter 1 Nice story!
Crazy Joe |
 Rivulet027 2008-10-13 . chapter 1No more? But that was an excellent prologue! It was creepy and the pace you set was fantastic, but really its only the set up for a story and after reading this I would love to read it. *shrugs* if you don't you don't, but *pokes* I would love it if you wrote more. Nice concept. |
 Iron-Mantis 2008-10-13 . chapter 1its ironic you cross over with this (Specially since i heard the next season of Pr going to have a terminator theme to it) |