Hey Chams I really enjoyed your story, it is beautifully written. I love your characters and I truly enjoy Bella willing to except the gifts Edward gives her. Hopefully you can update soon

I really really love this story. It is one of the best one night stand stories that I have ever read. I adored the love story and the development of Edward and Bella as a couple. I would love to read more!

i really love this story its a pitty its not finished yet, if you can could you update plZ. you a great writer.

Oh please please continue this story. I really am enjoying it and want to find out how the rest works out. I hope you decide to finish it and I will be awaiting the alert of a new chapter. :-D

Oh Lord! I almost don't want to move onto Chapter 13 for fear of how this one is gonna go with Charlie involved. Oh well.. bring on the drama. Awesome story btw. I hope you update soon. On last thing, do you plan on telling what the surprise Valentine's present from Edward and Alice in the living room was? Just got my curiousity, that's all. :-P

AWESOME!
PLEASE DO MORE SOON!
THANKS
ROSE
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umm cant wait till
next chapter hope you
write it as i can see
you havnt been on since
jan. 12. 2009

really hope you write ie
really good story

I have really enjoyed this story but now that I'm at the last chapter and it been close to 10 months since the last update I am sad cause I realize it means either you left the crazy world of FF entirely, RL is kicking your ass or you are stuck at some epic writer's block. No matter the reason, I hope you one day return cause this story is real good. You have developed very distinct characters and a sweet little plot. I could see how this could have just started out as a o/s but the positive feedback making you want to continue. I hope one day you decide to finish out this story cause I'm curious to see how your version ends. Not to mention the fact that I want to know if this kid is a girl or a boy. Good job and I hope to see Chapter 14 soon... or eventually.

Great story. Are you going to continue it? I hope so...
Don't worry my laptop does that thing where the taskbar disappears, it annoys the crap out of me lol.
Abbie

Hey I really like this story a lot and every time I see that it is incomplete and you haven't updated since January it kinda makes me mad. I REALLY, REALLY want another chapter please tell me whether or not you will be continuing this story like I said before i really like it and want to find out what you have planned for them next PLEASE continue it! I am begging you.

I really like this story. Are you going to finish it?

YOU BETTER MAKE ONE OF THE BIRTH OF THE BABY. I WHANT TO KNOW IF IT IS A GRIL OR A BOY?

I LIKE THE LAST SENTENCE "EDWARD-SHUT UP AND DRIVE" AND YOUR A VERY TALENTED WRITER KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB.

Your story is great but how about a update? I know that you must be very busy, I am, too, but... it just isn't right to abandon such a great piece of work, now is it? I love writing but I didn't add any of my stories to this website because I'm not English and I'm still learning to use this language in normal life, not only at my lessons... And if I added my story in Polish there probably wouldn't be many people to read it. So I think that you are very lucky to have such great readers who think that your fan fiction is worth their time. (It really is! :D) So please, please update it!

Really good story! But whatever you do, please do not call the baby Renesmee! it would be too much. Nessa, renee or olivia for a girl or just any other name (like shoe or umbrella) just please do not call her renesmee!