 cinderellagirl14 2009-10-04 . chapter 1I like this too! fantastic job on this one! :) |
 highland girl 1592 2009-04-10 . chapter 1Oh man,Rachel must've been disfigured
from that explosion(duh)but it obviously
shattered her mind too.Poor Rachel.:( |
 Mariagoner 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Damn, that's a fascinating inversion of what actually happened. I know it's unlikely you'll develop this but... oh, it's got all the potential in the world. |
 Computerfreak101 2008-11-10 . chapter 1Oh, I LOVE it. *Excellent* concept, I'd give anything to see it continued, though it works very well as a one shot. Great job. |
 Old-Wives-Tale 2008-10-23 . chapter 1You did amazing with the Joker. He's extremely believable. I don't think Rachel would try to murder Bruce though... but that's just me. |
 Kendra Luehr 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Wow, that was REALLY good; I'd actually like to see this continued, even though it already says complete. Maybe not a full-blown story, but at least one or two more chapters since the idea of Rachel getting revenge on Bruce is very intriguing to me, especially since she's seeking the Joker to help her. Very nicely done! |
 Vaetra 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Another awesome oneshot! It makes me wonder what would have happened next, and whether it would have worked out... Anyway, it's a really cool idea, and characterizations are great-- when they're talking, it sounds like *them*. Nice job! |
 Mizamour 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Oh wow! I can't wait to see more of this! Such an interesting twist - and your dialogue is awesome! |
 dark-hearted rose 2008-10-13 . chapter 1Amazing as always. More bonus points for again mentioning the socks. :D |