 pottersgirl91 2010-01-06 . chapter 6I wrote a short Hermione/Cedric piece and someone reviewed it, mentioning your story and how they loved it. So I thought, hey, it's Ced/Hermione, why not give it a go. And I must say, I'm loving it thoroughly! I always thought Ced dying was horrible. And you've made a completely believable story to keep him alive, and like I said, I'm absolutely enjoying your story 110%. I've only finished chapter 6, but I'm on to the next chapter. I haven't stopped reading since I started earlier. Splendid job!! |
 HarryPotterandSirusBlack 2010-01-05 . chapter 1 My best friend MoonyandProngs begged me to read this...and I'm glad she did! You're writing is amazing! It might take me a while to read the whole thing, but I'll try! |
 MoonyandProngs 2010-01-05 . chapter 40Wow! That was incredible! I loved it! I could understand Cedric’s struggles, having lived with the same struggles. But, I wish my wheelchair was like his, that would so cool, not to mention helpful. I loved the painting Mrs. Diggory gave Hogwarts, that was so cool. I loved the idea for a Hogwarts Common Room. When I read about Cedric’s attack when he was at the Grangers’, I couldn’t help but cry buckets. That was scary! I also cried when Esiban was taken away. That wasn’t fair! The further I read, the angrier I became with Umbridge. The Hufflepuff vote was so cool. I couldn’t stop smiling. My stomach was in knots throughout the whole journal chapter. I can’t believe Cedric was actually expelled! The Department of Mysteries battle had me on the edge of my chair. Losing their baby brought me to tears. I like that Cedric and Harry decided to become blood brothers. I loved the poetry at the end. |
 kathylibrarian 2009-11-28 . chapter 39youre the best harry potter fanfic writer ever! i love all your stories. very, very gj! |
 Twilightobsessed09 2009-11-27 . chapter 38I have read and I have enjoyed this to the max!
It was incredible, amazing and superb. I have always admired Cedric and wondered what would have been for him if he had lived. I guess you have answered that question for sucessfully.
I loved reading the Harry Potter series despite my usermname, it's just something else that I've fallen for. But Harry remains in my soul and what opened my eyes to others..
Thanks for this awesome read and looking forward to more from you... |
 Twilightobsessed09 2009-11-24 . chapter 15Really good chap! |
 Numbered.Tables 2009-11-22 . chapter 40Normally I would find some sort of negative aspect to comment on but I don't have one. It might have something to do with the fact that I haven't really looked for one but I'd say it is that its an amazing story.
I love it all; the handicap, esiban, the animagus, the relationship but most of all were two things. I had never really thought about Wizarding Art and this is a really nice idea; I did get lost once or twice with it but I definitely think you were along the right lines with your ideas. The second was the Unanimous Vote. It is a great idea and something that I could definitely imagine happening. The way you worded it as Hogwarts' conscience was definitely accurate. I am glad that I found a Hufflepuff story as it is definitely the least mentioned house but my favourite. You managed to pull off turning a simple character into a great, complex one and were able to pull off a veru un-canon pairing. Amazing story. |
 Aureola 2009-11-18 . chapter 38Hi,
I read your fanfic over the last two weeks. I must say I really like it, especially how well you pulled off the pairing, which is kind of unusual. The whole thing is very well-written and realistic, I especially like how you dealt with the handicap situation. Good job :) |
 NorthernLights25 2009-11-08 . chapter 39I loved this story! |
 Millie 2009-11-04 . chapter 30 I'd also like to point out that He couldn't have got rabies at all because Hogwarts is in Britain, and we don't have rabies here at all. One of the many advantages of being an Island nation. |
 Millie 2009-11-03 . chapter 20 I know that this story is AU (good work on the whole thing by the way I'm enjoying it) but you haven't messed with the things that happened before the third task, and I can't help but notice that you made a wee mistake about the whole Fred/George thing. I suppose it is rather common as people get mixed up between them all the time. But I just thought I'd mention, Angelina goes to the Yule Ball with George not Fred, Fred poor thing is the twin that dies at the end of the last book, and it's therefore obviously George that JK Rowling has said marries Angelina after the events in DH. Sorry to be picky, I just thought I might mention it. Otherwise I really am loving this story (apart from the occasional 'badly'but I suppose you must be american, so it's only to be expected), it is awfully long, I really do admire your dedication to writing this. |
 FalseReflections 2009-11-02 . chapter 40IMPALED is probably the dirties poem i've ever read.
Thank you. =) |
 FalseReflections 2009-11-02 . chapter 38you are a GODDESS!(i'm assuming you're a female)
I love the SummerKing myths being intertwined.
And Ced's mother.
And you made the characters REAL. As is, Cedric: considerate, honourable, nice. But still a horny boy at times. Needn't elaborate more.
Just the right amt description, though a tad heavy on self reflection in some scenes.
Love the humour injected.
LOVE the sex scenes.
Even if they seem quite...numerous.
LOVE the fact Sirius died. Wait...doesn't sound right. I mean, with regards to the actual plot...whatever. I'm sure you get me.
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL, but will only begin tmr. It's TWO AM here and i have WORK in five hours time.
BUT I LOVE YOU FOR THIS FIC! |
 hb2501 2009-10-12 . chapter 1GREAT STORY! |
 Lightning Struck 2009-10-09 . chapter 8Cedric is an idiot. It is more cruel to date her while he doesnt like her to break up with her. Gah.
Morgana |