|Reviews for FINDING HIMSELF|
| Gladioliby 5/8/13 . chapter 18
Maybe Cedric's anigmus will be a bird!
| Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 4
UUGGG! I want Cedric to walk and heal for real so badly. He probably wont but- but MAGIC, y know?
I really like Hermione and Cedric's conversations. And that conversation between the trio and Cedric, you got everyone spot on.
The way that you've written Cho and Cedric's relationship is very good, I think. It doesn't make either of them to be bad or dislikable people, which sometimes tends to happen when 2 characters need to break up in a story. I've gotten up to chapter 4 of this fic, but I think it's progressing very well. It's so good! I just want to read all of it, I wish Cedric would heal completely! Though this struggle is interesting to read also.
Ahh how will Harry react to Cedric?
| cdd12 5/3/13 . chapter 40
I almost squealed when I read there is a sequel! Love it. I saw this story rec'd at adifferentforest by LJ Summers. Thank you for writing this story!
| cdd12 5/3/13 . chapter 37
I'm so sad there isn't more than 40 chapters! What am I going to do?! : )
| cdd12 5/2/13 . chapter 33
This is my first Cedric HPFanfic and love it! I can't stop reading, it's wonderful!
| cocoartist 4/16/13 . chapter 38
This is probably the fourth time I've read this, maybe even more than that but it never gets old and your rendering of Umbridge is even more effective than Rowling's. Your characterisation is almost always spot on and I'm sad you've retired from fanfiction. I hope one day you find yourself motivated to re-explore it, although perhaps with a different lead (the young Tom Riddle written by you would be fascinating. Just saying.)
Anyway thank you for the commitment you made to this. I hope you're proud of it.
| rainbowlollipops15 4/9/13 . chapter 3
i love Cedric's mum as a character
| occamy 3/27/13 . chapter 38
hey, i am writing from germany, so please don't judge me by my improper use of your great language.
I have to admit that i am not a fan of HG/CD pairings, but this story genuinely intrigued me.
I don't know if you appreciate the way i review, but, well, here it is:
i think your story is something special, because:
- it was a round story, well written, and the mix up between your and JKR's language was very smooth. I looked up some scenes in my german copy of OotP and, well, i think you spoiled me. I cannot read it anymore in german, it feels really translated and as if there's something missing.
- i like your discription of the more intimate things... it's an art to describe romantic and erotic scenes without drifting of into something... juicy maybe? i am not sure how to say. Nontheless, i hope you understand.
-i liked the way you described cedrics dealing with his "constiution". I hate the word. For me, i take it pretty personal, and i want to express it that way: i've been healthy until i turned 11. there are times i still struggle with 'finding myself' and not being entirely useless.
- your characters are deep. and beatifully described. you put your heart and an enourmous amount of background knowledge in here. I liked it.
- i aalways wondered why hermione was not allowed to have a real BFF. now it's "clear as the mud" :)
- a scene, where hermione really talks to dobby. No, i reconsider: a scene whre dobby teaches hermione. becaus she has to learn some things.
- a scene where the grangers' medical friend gets to have acloser Ceddie.
i have not read the sequel yet, so forgive me, if was being rash.
And last not least: you are an artist with words. thanks for sharing with me :)
ps: i have something to confess: i still don't know what a racoon might be.
my last task for tonight before going to bed...
| silverpuppies 3/5/13 . chapter 40
Absolutely fantastic, one of the best fanfics I have ever read, I just couldn't put it down. Thank you!
| Blue Magic 13 2/24/13 . chapter 1
One of the finest stories of any fandom that I've ever had the pleasure to read. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.
| Aonokioku 2/13/13 . chapter 17
Hi, this is a freaking WONDERFUL story. I often don't review (forgive me), but something caught my eye.
"She never moved quickly, his mother - but when she did, it was devastating"
This sentence makes little sense. 'Never' and 'when she did' don't go together. If you wish to emphasize how little she does it, use a word like 'rarely' or 'almost never', not never, because never is not at all.
Okay, that's my rant. Thank you for writing!
| SnapeMalfoy 2/3/13 . chapter 39
I loved it! Can't wait for the sequel!
| Katara-Hatake 2/2/13 . chapter 22
His Mom's awesome.
| cmoody74 1/31/13 . chapter 38
Just found this story and love love it, amazing job!
| nitefang 1/13/13 . chapter 27
That painting is bothering me. I really want to know what's happening with that painting.