Nice D/V interlude. Really enjoyed. b

Nice! Trapped and forced to confront their feelings.

Love the conversation between Daniel and Vala, not to mention their inner thoughts about each other. And I thought the bit about Daniel's 'not' birthday party on the Odyssey was a nice touch. Boy did Daniel misjudge Vala on that one! ;)

Leave it to Daniel to draw the wrong conclusions on Vala's actions towards him. I'm finally glad she was able to give an explanation on why she thru the party for Daniel. It was really heartfelt that it seems sometimes, Vala has that little girl in her that just wants to be accepted and loved. She really doesn't understand sometimes why people want to hate her for herself. It was nice they made up and became intimate without strings attached. Of course Mitchell knowing he won the bet between Daniel and Vala making up was a plus. hehehe :D

I also thought that it should be longer, but just because it was cute and fun. I liked the way you mirrored the scene in unending but with a lot less drama, which I think makes sense since they didn't have all the stress & tension in the Temple.

You've been busy Maeve, I liked this one. Daniel and Vala in confined place alone with their feelings. Thought Vala's admission of love was a bit hurried, could have done with being a bit longer, she's as defensive as he is despite her flirtatious ways but it had a good night conversation air to it and I liked her peeping as he changed. Tease, he knew she would.
Nice story.

Cute! Nicely written. xD