| Reviews for Kiss for the Iron Bat |
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Xx-Shinigami-Sama-xX 12/19/12 . chapter 1THAT WAS SOOOOOO CUTE AND FUNNY! sorry I had to put that in caps! lol fave Kiss Kiss Bang Bang fanfic! |
bee27 9/1/10 . chapter 1I couldn't stop laughing. I love this. I can't wait to read more of your stories. Thank you for your sweet words. |
Nian 7/21/10 . chapter 1 Oh! dear this is amazing, I loooooove all the characters and i congratulate you very much!, I guess I read it to late but any way this is still a very well done job! |
PrimeFan 5/10/10 . chapter 1I'm in stitches, because this? This is awesome and made of so much WIN. I like how Tony and Perry slept together, because that is so them. And I loved it even more that Bruce and Harry DIDN'T sleep together because, yeah. It was so in-character, even if it made me weep a little because damn if that wasn't a little heartbreaking. And, btw? Your Harry voice? So spot on. I saw 'marry' at the top and thought rather appropriately, WTF? Because really? I was so seeing a movie running through my head through out the whole fic and that says alot for how good it is. "Like a fungus." -Utter. Stitches. It was Kiss Kiss Bang Bang atmosphere but with all the effed upness that Bruce/Tony brings to the table. ...I'm gonna stop ranting now. . XDDDD Thanks for writing this joy of a fic. |
Lex 3/30/10 . chapter 1 Written pretty well, though I felt you were somewhat only half hearted in the writing of this story. I only noticed very minor errors, the first of which being "[...] I looked like this Tony Stark guy, only younger and dumber, the later by a lot [...]". You used later when it should have been latter. Again though, that's a very minor issue and one that virtually everyone makes. The second error (which I don't really believe was an error but I'm mostly mentioning it because I found it off) was the sudden switch between past and present tense. You started this story clearly in past tense, then without warning it became present. At first I thought this was an error, then when reading it more I realized that it was more of a switch to being in the particular moment for the rest of the story, to be somewhat there but telling from a first person somewhat distant view (if that makes any sense). So other than those issues, not bad. Seemed to be an excess of dialogue which somewhat pulled from an atmosphere to make the story seem very rushed (hence my feelings that you may have been half hearted in it). Alright, I've rambled lol, c'est tout *kisses* |
Malicious Sherlock 3/10/10 . chapter 1This is the first time I've ever hated Tony. He slept with Perry? I could've come through the computer and smacked him. Oh, and Harry is a moran! I finally get what Perry's been saying. He's got Tony Stark, and Perry right in front of him and he goes to marry Bruce! Perry's the only sensible one in this fic. Needless to say, a very captivating story. I like it. You really had me feeling like I was THERE. Good thing I wasn't because I would have messed up the whole story by slapping all these morons around. |
RuByMoOn17 3/2/10 . chapter 1hahhaa interesting! |
just-a-shadow-of-death 2/17/10 . chapter 1Loved it. This was great, I love Harry and Wayne. They make a great couple. |
SetInSmoke 5/6/09 . chapter 1I recently watched Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang just so I'd understand your fic. lol. It's my favorite movie now, but that's not the point. I love how Perry sleeps with Tony, because he looks like Harry and and Bruce kisses Harry for the same reason. Great fic! |
Krad's Girl 4/10/09 . chapter 1OMG you're batman, Iron Man, Kiss Kiss Bang Bang story was so good! i can't believe i haven't read a crossover with these movies before they fit so perfectly. If you have any future ideas for this crossover you should write them because you are a great writer and that was a really original, funny, engaging and interesting idea. Good Job |
aislinnrae 12/25/08 . chapter 1Omg, effing awesome. That was very, very, VERY cool. Very awesome. Alfred FTW. Seriously, the only words I have are 'awesome' and 'cool'. You win at everything. |
lilaclove 12/8/08 . chapter 1This was really good. I thought it was an interesting take on Harry and Perry getting together. I actually did like the ending :). Great job and keep writing, I really loved it. |
angels in wonderland 11/29/08 . chapter 1Very original! I love the idea of two Robert Downey, Jr.'s together! LOL. |
In2lalaland 10/26/08 . chapter 1Ahahahahaha! My god, this was fantastic! It was so much fun to read. I really liked your Harry, he was just amazing. Man, this made my day. Thank you. |
Arigazi 10/16/08 . chapter 1What is that? A threat? "I'll know if you like it by reader traffic"? Then I don't need to say that I loved it, right? *snort* It was really funny, especially that bit about him shaving off the beard at the end and in the middle. I liked how you changed it, or adjusted it anyway. I like how Bruce and Tony fought better this way than when Stark just grabbed his tie and pulled him down for a kiss. Tony did seem to give in to the whole "marriage the next day" thing rather easily though. I wish you would write a story from either Bruce or Tony's point of view. I would love to see how it would come out. Anyway, now I'm off. Looking forward to your next installment of your other Bruce/Tony story, but I'm patient. Genius takes time. Arigazi |