It was a very interesting (I mean that in a good way) choice to tell the story in the third person. The novel American Psycho takes place inside Patrick's head, and somehow that makes all his rapes and murders seem okay, at least in the reality of the story. What you did makes it all the more fantastically unsettling.

Oh sweetie, I'm so happy that you posted this! = ) I can never read enough of your stuff and it's always nice to read something like this, odd though the pairing may be to some. I understand. = )

This fic has succeeded in accomplishing everything that you wanted it to. And for some reason I am totally in love with the 'vigorous carnal enjoyment' line. :D Your work is always submitted at this quality level and I just love it. In the few lines the Joker actually speaks, you've captured him in such a way that is just so like him. It's not a result of your fangirlishness at all - It's a result of your exceptional talent. = ) I really can't wait until your Prompts list is full. I promise I will think of some more to give you, soon. :D