The first SasuNaru/ yaoi pair fiction on Naruto fic ever...I don't know what to say. *is a yaoi disliker*

... *speechless
! *speechlessness over
Amazing. I think this is the most in character sasunaru fluff, and it's one of the first ones. How did you do that?

... *oh great, you made me speechless again*

First Naruto fic ever!(well 'least in this site) it was writen eleven year ago from now too, and most importand... a SasuNaru yeiiiii!

Your story wasn't bad, I liked a lot)

Wow!im a naru hina fan and I know there arch
Enemy's with sakunaru but for the first ever narut

O fanfic I have to say good job(never thought a
Extreme naruhina fan would say that) not half-assed

wow 1st completed Naruto fic what an honor to read

Like every other SasuNaru fan, I'm proud that the first ever fanfic on this site is SasuNaru!

Ahhhh I finally read the first ever Naruto fic :D I feel complete...

It's a shame it's a yaoi though, but even so, it was pretty good- not that it would matter anyway. You probably aren't even on this site anymore xD

cute! _ and to think the first ever naruto fic was a yaoi. congartes!

Sooooo, kawaiiiii T.T i miss the days when Sasuke was in konoha. I don't like him much, but whhhhyyyyy did he have to leave? Poor naruto...lol, first ever naruto fanfic and I LOVED IT! You are aweomse. Love NarSasu, so cute! You should be a professional author someday

This was entirely adorable and completely in character... I loved it... It makes me sad that Sasuke left, I think he and Naruto could have grown together... But I commend you for such a wonderful story... I've come across rather proper...

This fic made me laugh and sorta cry at the same time. It was funny how the first Naruto fic was a slash story haha. It made me cry because it said "Spoiler Up To Chapter 33" thinking of how it's currently at about 500 and looking back at the original characters like Haku and Zabuza. Well, I commend you for writing such a wondeful piece of prose even though you probably have forgotten all about this.
Cheers
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Ah the first Naruto fic ever! And it's pretty good too!

Haha I love the "Spoiler: Up to chapter 33". It's so funny because if this fic had been written recently it probably would have said something like "Spoiler: Up to chapter 558"! Ah memories...But anyway this story is good. I wonder if you're even still a Naruto fan.

Is so cute . Sasuke-in-denial is always so adorable! I couldn't keep the shit eating grin off my face when I realized that the first published fanfic for Naruto was a SasuNaru totally applaud you for that haha.

Normally I don't like the pairing, but this was really great. I know you'll not even read this, because it's 10 years since this was written (I was 8 during that time). But I'd like to thank you for writing the first Naruto fic such greatly. You may not even be a part of the fandom now but the first Naruto fic will always be in my heart bye

Starting with a mysterious start isn't good unless it's a mystery story. You should start with a more catchy beginning. Also your paragraphs should be organized to have a better sound to it and people will know when the next thing happens.