This was great; I really felt Dean's emotions and the turmoil of his seventh year. Great job!

This was thoroughly amazing, though short. In its conciseness, I found beauty in your witing. Great work. I hope to see more of Dean from you in the future.

Prytania

oh my goodness. it had a melencholy feeling, yet the feeling of hope. it was excellent and beautiful. I think it is a spectacular character sketch of Dean

Oh, that was beautiful! I loved the slightly different beginning end, and Jake becoming whole happy, and Dean needing to know that his friends were alive, and the part with his companions dead, so sad! And his mum growing away from him...beautiful job!