woah, this is really really amazing for a 10-years old story and sorta mysterious too (I'm trying to figure out who was the other person)

i like you end note

Danm its been an amazing 10 years hasn't it and congrats 4 the first naruto fic :3

So the first Naruto fanfic came in 2001?. That pretty cool! I didnt know that this website made catagory for Naruto in 2001. Well anyway this is interesting.

Wow, this is quite good! Wooow... After ten years... Amazing how time goes by, ne?

Woah.

This was just so... wonderful. I loved it. You're so talented. I'm glad that this was the very first story of Naruto ever on this sight. And might I say, almost ten years later and your STILL getting reviews. :D Sucess!

This was really good! You have a way with words.
I wish I could write like this but, unfortunately, I can't. D

Oh, well. I think that you should write more citrus. D

holy shit. this is the very first naruto fanfic on . wow. u must be proud as hell.

Really liked this story, clever and mysterious.

Great work once again)

How can your writing be so beautiful? It is unfair on a level of being near god-like. I love your writing. I have a lot to learn about painting with words from you. You're right, you are more of an artist than a writer.

This was actually an okay fic. I loved the last sentence, and it was really cool. Very vague, though. Maybe you were trying to go for that, who knows. But it was quite mysterious. It peaked my interest.

Ah, how...um, sweet? Yes, loved it.

you write the best stories ever

I could feel this...the cold surface. Very well written. P: