How can your writing be so beautiful? It is unfair on a level of being near god-like. I love your writing. I have a lot to learn about painting with words from you. You're right, you are more of an artist than a writer.

This was actually an okay fic. I loved the last sentence, and it was really cool. Very vague, though. Maybe you were trying to go for that, who knows. But it was quite mysterious. It peaked my interest.

Ah, how...um, sweet? Yes, loved it.

you write the best stories ever

I could feel this...the cold surface. Very well written. P:

^.^ Twas great. But I was distracted, when I was reading it, so I was reading distractedly. But very good, anyways. Brilliant!

Why not do anything citrus? I thought it was good. I've wanted to write something like this for a while now, but it never seems to come out right, so I'm glad you did it well.

Hay I think it was great I you should you shouldn't give up so easy. You are gifted

:O! But that was so good! you must write more citrus! (that was sasuke and naruto right? >>..

um...well-written. very well written. *wretches over side of computer chair* seriously, wonderful job, but at the same time very disturbing.

wow, your story was just amazing. the descriptions were exquisit. i thought the reflection was sasuke the entire time until you mentioned the mirror. GREAT TWIST!! please read some of my own stories. well right now i only have one but it is really really good. I spent forever on it! Luv ya,

~Sasuke forever luvr

like...whoa.

...Gods, that was... wow.

Seriously, wow.

I liked it! Very much so, in fact...I LOVE IT! Keep up the great work!

Beautiful...in a twisted, makes-you-contemplate kind of way. Nice emotional inlook into Naruto, and a little hint of citrus. Should you write more citrus? Certainly, if it's as awesome as this. ^__^