Bonus points for getting both "effulgent" and "puissant" into the same poem. Zak's "I think we should fight. It's a lot simpler." attitude made me laugh.

what a sweet little story! :D

gotta love it!

Lovely, just lovely. An inspired piece.

That was incredibly amusing for some reason.

Ramnia"Oh gods, not this...She's drunk...
Ken"Oh yeah? What about you and the elverquisst contest!
Ramnia"But he said that I couldn't do it!
Ken"Exactly!
Ramnia"But I showed him!
Ken*sigh*

::smothering laughter Cute. And well written. I loved it.

Ha! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH! Oh, how thou dost love thy Jarlaxle! Jarlaxle, Jarlaxle, where for art thou Jarlaxle! Personally, dear old Zaky having poetic sense is quite disturbing, but overall a great humorous feature! By the way, do you like cheese? Have you ever gotten high on Surge? If the answer is a joyous and hearty YES! then you shall win the grand prize- a one way first class ticket to Aaaaaaaaallllbuquerque! Have fun! Remember kiddies: Live well, laugh well, WRITE OFTEN!

Heheh. Yeah, two guys getting drunk is always entertaining. And yes- I always thought Jarlaxle had hair as well. probably shaved it off so no one would recognize him. But whatever- it IS rather hard to believe Zak has a poetic side to him.

I don't know whether to say "Poor Zak" or "Poor Jarlaxle"... Nicely done piece, as always.

*giggle*snort
PPPOOOORRRR ZAK!