so is she going to stay or not? that's the question.

i love this)

Very well written. I really like how you explore and give more depth to this relationship. I think that because Bella tries not to dwell on it and because most readers want to see her with Edward, we tend to dismiss the Jacob/Bella connection, but it is real and you have captured it.

Oh wow, that absolutely killed me. Truly realistic characterisation paired with a good dose of painful angst. Scary as that sounds, I really loved it.

THis is absolutly amazing! I'm always by people who can bring Jacob to life in just a few words.

this. is. awesomness! i lurves it!

bella really did hurt jake man i always thought of the pain he is going through. poor guy. i liked your story b/c it wasn't sappy it showed reality
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