It's really good, though shorter than I usually look for so I'm glad I read it anyway.
Thank you for writing it this far.
Onto Aucune Defense Pour Toi then.

The end? Happy ending Love the story.

Yay! Revelations!

nice

This was frustratingly good.

Wow! I loved this fanfiction. You are truly great at writing romance. This story was very butterfly inducing, and made my heart pound really hard. The flow of the story went very well, and I loved all the details. Thank you for writing this!

Heh... I really like this story! Great job!

AWESOME, too bad it's discontinued XD! Thanks for the awesome read, can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!

This is complete genius. I can only hope your legacy continues under another writer, because I find this both fascinating and brilliant. I shall keep my fingers crossed.

Most Satisfactory.

Two chapters. Within two chapters you have officially made me a Fleur/Hermione fan. The pacing is just right and the flow of the story makes for an interesting read. A pity you aren't writing more but good job on what you HAVE written.

This has been an amazing read. I love the story flow, and everything thus far. I especially loved how you've developed the characters and story. Even though it was only two chapters, this has been one of the best quality fan fictions I've read. Thank you so much for sharing. :D-Jyuami

Very Interesting! I really enjoyed reading it!

Hmm... I always thought it ended at the kiss. Which was good enough for me. But I do love your writing so.

I just love the way you write Hermione and Faith as well.

Seriously. That fear Hermione has for brooms... BRILLIANT.

were just... well... so broom-like.

Sometimes she just wanted to go out and buy a rug.

BWHAHAHA. I love that Freudian Slip or what you well. That was excellent.

You, dreiser are the sole reason why I started to like Fleur/Hermione