OMG! YOU KILLED HER! seriously why?? wait i know why it fits in with the storyline but yeah thats not on but it did work and it was really good so i will not be comming after you with a pitchfork :) lol and the epilogue was really sweet liked that, and yay i love the butterfly has flapped its wings so i will forgive you for killing lily as you are going to continue with that one :) x

I have one thing to say after reading these last two chapters...SCREW YOU SUZIE!

I can't believe she did that. Oh my gosh, and poor Jack, it's just horrible. But at least we know that he does find someone again, with Ianto...wait...

WHY DOES EVERYONE JACK LOVES DIE BEFORE THEIR TIME?!

Great story! I really hope that you don't kill Ellie too...That would be horrible...but hey, you're the writer!

That was sad! Loved it! Made me want to cry! I think you should try to find away to bring her back.

Sweet filler, why the sadness hmm?? can she just be with jack and be happy? lol i see your still gunna try and finish it to the deadline you set your self well done :)

I really like this story, it's great, but...

Are you gonna update The Master's Return soon? I'm freaking out!

Good but boo you slacker no smut...ha i sound like a loser but yeah that was really sweet and i love the necklace idea i would totally buy one like that if there was one, and the pocket watch was a cool idea can't wait to find out what matthews present was :) x

Love it! Add more soon please!

Love it! Add more soon please !

Yay a new chapter well done :) I can't wait for the dinner they have update soon :) setting yourself a bit of a challenge there trying to get this one finished and posted by october but i think you will do it x

FABULOUS. please update sonn

Sweet, i hope she wears a gorgeous dress to the mass and for dinner the next day, but i thought that was just for jack and her you know like a romantic christmas dinner? But i loved it anyway and can't wait for the next bit just try and get some sleep though at some point x

Love IT! Add more soon please! What is she wareing to mass? A cute dress?

Love IT! Please add more, it was cute! An Soon!

Aw, that was sweet but no I don't think anyone really puts cranberries or popcorn on their trees over here but it seems like a nice idea :) update soon when your not watching buffy lol x

Aw, sweet can't wait for the next bit, hope u had fun in chicago, update soon x