Lol, brilliant, it had me laughing till I finished it.

o.0 let's say...i'm completely shocked. extremely shocked. o.0 -face turns pale- i guess you know why. Riku's fat!? o.0 so not going to happen. Sora's...a playboy. =.= the only ones i'm satisfied is Roxas and Axel. lol. XD i know Axel's too pretty for his own good.

and...i can accept that Demyx and Sora are best friends. xD since i've read a lot of fics of them like that. Roxas and Marluxia..? very few. Zexion and Riku dating!? -faints- oh, i'd like to request a Zemyx! xD my second favourite couple.

OW! Didn't I tell you I love traumatic stuff, I just can't believe how crack yet fun this turned out! ^^ Keep writting while sleep-intoxicated, tremendous ideas pop from there ^^.

SO, I really thought more than once about demmy-roxas, but never in my fan-time have I thought sora-demmy. KOOL PAIRING! Also, I like your description of marly, definitely wondrous... I wonder... why didn't Roxy's nekomimi come to conversation?

SO... I observed no typos, which is definitely WONDERful... and I can't seem to find any right now, keep up the good work ^^

I know this is stupid, -the comment- but do you have a plot or is this plain old write for fun stuff? No, I don't plan to tell you to stop it... I plan on handling you a ginormous cookie for such in-promptu work if it is, I've never managed to write in-promptu well... ^^"

SO... first time I see Riku-Zexy, most writers -and fans, to be true- see them as archfoes... I like the idea, and the hamsters too...

SO... nice 10 char review... the deal is, I LOVE THIS STUFF, It's just so like me -random yet organized- and it's just so amazingly fun! -hands a ginormous cookie and a glass of milk just as big- FOR being so great ^^

Love, life, time, luck, inspiration and sleep to you ^^! 'Till later! ^^

OH JEEZ. I LOVE YOU. YOU'VE ADDED A NEW CRACK PAIRING TO MY LIST. FUHCK. WHY HADN'T I SEEN IT BEFORE?! ZexionxRiku = SEXY. m~.
"We do not speak of the chocolate." When he said that, was he referring to a certain incident or did he mean it in reverence? LOLcubed holy chocolate x'D
ilu. Your stories always make me laugh X3 not that I've read all that many *shot* But but but like you said, you just recently started to give this account attention and.. D:

Awesome story, I think it's hilarious!
Question though, What are the pairings in this story going to be? So far, it seems like RokuMar, Zemku,and maybe SoDem, but all those pairings are so weird! XD
I'm used to AkuRoku, Zemyx, RiSo ect. the more cannon ones, the only one I really like from that list is AkuRoku though, but I guess it's good to think outside the box!
Please update soon!

You know something... This has TRAUMA ALERT! Which is good! ^^. Yup, kinda freaked out with transgender Ax, but nothing big. And poor Riku... T_T.

^^ Good luck with this, I know how difficult beginnings are ^^.

Life, luck, love, time, sleep and inspiration ^^! 'till later! ^^

H'OMG! M-RATED CRACK WITH THE POSSIBILITY OF AN ORGY?! M * U * I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOAR *A*
This fic shows promise *w*

cool :DD

wow, how interesting!! i think this view of the characters is really interesting! i really wanna know more about them all though. i especially like axel. roxas second best. but yeah, great work, you write really well, so please update soon! :D

I love this story so far, the way that you portray the characters is awesome!

This looks like it'll be the good kind of crazy. Especially Axel. Oh god, Axel. He cracked me up.

You $%^& you made Riku pudgy and Axel a transvstite! *flames* lol only joking, seems interesting next chapter \o/

You know, this was a lot better than I thought it would be. I thought it would be something like 'HAI GUYZ! This iz mah first fanfic so plz, no flames!'. But it wasn't. And I thank you for that.

XD from the first moment I read "Riku's just another fat kid covered in chocolate." I knew this was just going to be an epic win. (Besides the fact it's written by you) Or "maybe" it's just because I'm a Riku hater. LULZ. Sorry, had to use maybe, it was too good to pass up.

I always imagined Sora as a player, hahaha, his cute face gives way too many nosebleeds. Axel the transvestite... if I had drawing powers I would so draw that. XD And Roxas as a cat, how ironic, and I wonder why he always has sunglasses? Do I sense a deep heart-wrenching tale of woe? ... *shrug*

I demand an update! :D This is too awesome not to be updated! Hurry as quick as possible!