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Reviews for: Chappa'ai
spacegypsy1
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Delightful!
acer-sigma
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
This was a brilliantly done period peace! Of course, Daniel fits perfectly into the whole scenario, and I thought it was masterful how you found an excellent role for Vala in that time period.

I also found that you did a good job of carrying over their relationship into this time period as well.

Loved the ending there, with the whole chappa'ai comment and everything.
HAZMOT
2008-10-15 . chapter 1
I'm not quite sure why you picked a period peice in London in the 1800's but I'm sure the notion was for romantic reasons. Daniel kept his date with Vala in this century and definitely he's not shy. hehehe :D
CaramelMonkey
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
Cute! xD
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