 acer-sigma 2008-10-17 . chapter 1This was a brilliantly done period peace! Of course, Daniel fits perfectly into the whole scenario, and I thought it was masterful how you found an excellent role for Vala in that time period.
I also found that you did a good job of carrying over their relationship into this time period as well.
Loved the ending there, with the whole chappa'ai comment and everything. |